Satan's Apple

I wonder if God hates cowards, for

My sins mushroom near Satan's apple

I live and die in my own filth

No human or angel treads 

Near my Mandragora hub

Its narcotism excites my senses

Uncotrollable erotic desires

Grip me in its poisonous beauty 

I surfeit in my inhumane pleasures

No saviour can save me

From my aphrodisiac pleasures

The spell I cast on all trespassers

To join me in my hell

Whether now or later, I'll trap you

Whether now or later, I'll trap you



April 21, 2016

For Rob Carmack

Inspired by Tom Hawks' song, 'God Hates Cowards'

Mandrakes/ Satan's apple are the fruit of the Mandragora .  The plant is known as an aphrodisiac.
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Gazbowski Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:20 PM
A stirring write Balveen.
A   Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Epic win Balveen...congrats. Linda
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Thanks Linda!
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Congrats on your placement, Balveen :)
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Thanks MF!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Balveen..
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Thanks & love Upma dear!
Lawless Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Remind me never to go apple picking with you Baleen. Nicely done although "nice" is not a word that apples to the depth of this sinful write. Congrats on the placement
Cheema Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 12:59 PM
Haha! That's for the protagonist not me, John! We would rather write! All he same, thanks John!
Carmack Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Powerfully impressive. "My sins mushroom near Satan's apple" Like from the darkness of it's shadow and from the soil of our works. Thank you Balveen and congrats.
Cheema Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Thanks for your appreciation Rob! This for sure was not an easy write!
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