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Satan and Almighty God- Collab

You Suffocate Me with Darkness… ~Satan~ Lawless, deceiver Perverting, accusing, murdering Fallen angel, ruler of darkness, marriage destroyer You stalk, you lie, you destroy, you steal my loved ones’ joy You are the real loser in The End You permeate my life with prisms of warm sunshine… ~Almighty God~ Rejuvenator, love illustrator, galaxy maker, poem saver Shepherding, protecting, sacrificing Prince of Peace, Sea-calmer, our best friend You came, you lived, you sacrificed your life You are the main event In Paradise… Our Lord Written by John Aaron Green & Gwendolen Rix 1-2-11 For Opposites Attract Collaboration Contest~Tracie Indigo Dream Weaver John wrote the first half and believes that our poems will be inscribed into the streets of gold in Heaven which is referenced in the second half-- “poem saver”. Gwendolen wrote the second half.

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Date: 8/29/2012 3:48:00 PM
I love the way you wrote this ,,,, AWESOME " I see why this won ;}
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 6:31:00 PM
Just saw this at Gwen's place. She is such a cool lady and an awesome poet, and you two created a marvelous contrasting set here. I like how you formatted here with the short lines going down like a funnel. Congrats to you both!
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Date: 1/14/2012 5:24:00 PM
Glad to see this on the winner's list! a great collaboration. congrats on your win :)
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Date: 1/13/2012 2:28:00 PM
Hi John! Like what I told Gwendolen, this is such a powerful collab, a great topic to write on and you put the contrast here so well! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 1/13/2012 12:33:00 PM
just goes to show two heads are better than one.. what a divine, sublime write, gwenie and aaron.. congrats with hugggs! :)
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Date: 1/13/2012 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your joint win x
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:28:00 AM
CONGRATS JOHN ON AN EXCELLENT WIN WITH GWENDOLEN.. TWO KINDRED SPIRITS COLLABORATING TO BRING A MESSAGE ABOUT OUR LOVING CREATOR AND THE "ENEMY" WE FIGHT DAILY.. EXCITING WORDS LUV..
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Date: 1/11/2012 1:28:00 PM
Thats depth in both! excellence. U know, you know see ya face to face..:)
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:32:00 AM
this is such a WONDERFUL COLLAB..I KNOW JOHN IS A GREAT POET AND A GREAT HUMAN BEIGN TOO...I WISH U ALL THE BEST FOR THIS CONTEST....CHEERS !
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:37:00 AM
As I said to Nikko, very impressive write! you guys are a force to be reckoned with for this contest! btw, I like your descriptions so much that I couldn't even pick a favorite line. good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:48:00 PM
This was beautiful...so dark in the beginning and then you two allowed Gods brilliant light to shine! Wonderful colab!! :) luv Tosh
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Date: 1/8/2012 12:17:00 PM
Two extremes of our universe...Very good collab !!! Enjoyed !!!
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Date: 1/7/2012 4:02:00 PM
this was beautiful good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 1/7/2012 6:16:00 AM
What a great collab from 2 of the soups most talented poets... Very enjoyed.. Michael
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Date: 1/6/2012 11:21:00 PM
AH THE NEVER ENDING BATTLE AND STRUGGLE OF DARKNESS AND LIGHT.. AMAZING JOHN AND THANKXX FOR WONDERFUL WORDS TO ME DURING MY DARK HOURS ...HIS LIGHT IS STRONGER .. WE ARE MORE THAN CONQUERORS LUV..
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:30:00 PM
wow!John... you and RIX... are truly awesome... and she is a very good poet... and has my support.... Now i envy her...lol.... I have over 40 collaborations with poets on the soup.... and have none with you...lol... what do you say...I need some writing inspiration... i love both verses here... always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:04:00 PM
Great comments from Soupers on your first collab. Congrats on that alone!! You love the Lord and His fingerprints are all over your poetry. Never stop writing. I will be away for a week maybe 2. Gotta judge my limerick contest and get organized for the New Yr. All the best. Gwendolen
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:32:00 PM
The two of you are a force to be reckoned with! Both parts are full of amazing energy and of course you nail the truth down to perfection. P S Thanks for wandering about in my old poems John, your sweet comments are so much appreciated. :)
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:55:00 AM
This is an absolute stunner John and Gwendolen, wish you guys all the best for the contest.. love the topic you guys has chosen!! Hope to see it on the winner's list ;) Wilma
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Date: 1/3/2012 11:00:00 PM
Hey, I read this about an hour ago over at Gwen's place. It rocks!! I think you will score with this one, John. Great idea you guys came up with!
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Date: 1/3/2012 4:14:00 PM
You two did an awesome job here!Very nice,very nice! :-)
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Date: 1/3/2012 4:12:00 PM
Hey hey John Aaron...you are a delightful individual and a gifted poet...let's do another one of these in the future! I think u and I have found a treasured topic!! Gwendolen
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