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Sash of Tears: Lune

SASH OF TEARS

The frigid air
suffocates slow the crimson heart:
sash of tears...
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Pretty Little Lunes - Poetry Contest
Sponsor Name - Andrea Dietrich

Olive Eloisa Guillermo
9:50 pm, August 02, 2015

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Marvin G. Celestial Date: 8/29/2015 10:23:00 AM I like this the most! Congratz for being a lifetime member here Olive! Proud to be Pinoy! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 8/21/2015 12:24:00 PM Olive, so beautifully written. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 8/19/2015 12:18:00 PM Gorgeous write, Olive. So sad but so beautiful. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/16/2015 11:06:00 PM What a wonderful imagery dear Olive! Congrats on big win! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/16/2015 10:30:00 PM Beautifully written, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/16/2015 8:44:00 PM Hi Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/16/2015 1:39:00 AM Olive, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/16/2015 3:33:00 AM thanks much Skat.. =`)

Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2015 7:29:00 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Olive:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/16/2015 3:31:00 AM thank you so much.. =`)

Casarah Nance Date: 8/15/2015 7:14:00 AM Beautifully said and matches the picture so perfectly, glad to see this one on the winners list! Grats Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/1/2015 4:26:00 AM thanks much Cassie.. =")

Paul Callus Date: 8/15/2015 5:47:00 AM Congratulations on yet another podium win, Olive_eloi! ~ Hope you are enjoying your heart-throbbing treat:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/1/2015 4:25:00 AM thank you so much PAul.. as always I try my best to pass a write.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/15/2015 1:04:00 AM this picture probably produced the most beautiful of the poems in general, Olive, and that sash of tears was just so incredible to me! Very nicely done! Congrats in my contest. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/1/2015 4:22:00 AM thank you so much Andie for seeing my poem a worthy winner.. =')!

Skat A Date: 8/11/2015 2:27:00 AM That's deep. ..SKAT Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/1/2015 4:21:00 AM not much Skat.. ;)

Kelly Deschler Date: 8/9/2015 7:40:00 PM This is lovely and quite an emotional haiku, Olive Eloisa. It perfectly matches the accompanying image!... Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/1/2015 4:20:00 AM thank you so much Kelly.. =')

Kp Nunez Date: 8/4/2015 7:23:00 AM lovely imagery for this lune, Olive. hugs! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/5/2015 8:49:00 AM thanks much Kim and hugs back!!... =')

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/3/2015 5:05:00 PM Very descriptive lines that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visits to my page.Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/5/2015 8:48:00 AM Sara, I'm on and off in Soup because of having not enough time hence when I have I try to go to poets included in my list to read.. =')!!! When I read your poems they soothe me Sara.. and they leave me awed!~Olive hugs!

Paul Callus Date: 8/3/2015 4:13:00 PM Love this beautiful haiku (Lune) Olive_eloi. It goes very well with the visual, too. gl in the contest. hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/5/2015 1:31:00 AM THanks much PAul, there are two that caught my attentions however the second one I got some hard time forming the words so I settled on this.. hugs back! thanks!

Constance La France Date: 8/3/2015 1:44:00 PM Olive, your lune drips with beauty, beautifully penned Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/5/2015 1:21:00 AM So is yours Broken WIngs.. =')!!!

Emile Pinet Date: 8/3/2015 1:21:00 PM Your word choices define what you wish to capture and you convey these emotions well. Emile. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/4/2015 1:31:00 AM first time I saw the first Image this the muse that came.. ! Im thinking of the #7 but am thinking twice.. =') thanks..

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2015 3:26:00 PM - Beautifully written, dear Olive - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/4/2015 1:24:00 AM thank you so much Anne Lise.. Im glad you find it beautiful.. =")

James Fraser Date: 8/2/2015 12:21:00 PM The image captured so well in your Haiku Olive, love it, hugs//James xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/3/2015 2:42:00 PM Thanks much James..= ) hugs back..=')

Jan Allison Date: 8/2/2015 9:18:00 AM oh so beautiful Olive - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/3/2015 3:43:00 AM thank you so much Jan.. =')hugs back!