Sash of Tears: Lune

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SASH OF TEARS The frigid air suffocates slow the crimson heart: sash of tears... ________________________________ ***#1 Pretty Little Lunes - Poetry Contest Sponsor Name - Andrea Dietrich Olive Eloisa Guillermo 9:50 pm, August 02, 2015

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Date: 8/29/2015 10:23:00 AM
I like this the most! Congratz for being a lifetime member here Olive! Proud to be Pinoy!
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:24:00 PM
Olive, so beautifully written. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/19/2015 12:18:00 PM
Gorgeous write, Olive. So sad but so beautiful.
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Date: 8/16/2015 11:06:00 PM
What a wonderful imagery dear Olive! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/16/2015 10:30:00 PM
Beautifully written, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/16/2015 8:44:00 PM
Hi Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:39:00 AM
Olive, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
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Date: 9/16/2015 3:33:00 AM
thanks much Skat.. =`)
Date: 8/15/2015 7:29:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Olive:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2015 3:31:00 AM
thank you so much.. =`)
Date: 8/15/2015 7:14:00 AM
Beautifully said and matches the picture so perfectly, glad to see this one on the winners list! Grats
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Date: 9/1/2015 4:26:00 AM
thanks much Cassie.. =")
Date: 8/15/2015 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on yet another podium win, Olive_eloi! ~ Hope you are enjoying your heart-throbbing treat:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/1/2015 4:25:00 AM
thank you so much PAul.. as always I try my best to pass a write.. :D!
Date: 8/15/2015 1:04:00 AM
this picture probably produced the most beautiful of the poems in general, Olive, and that sash of tears was just so incredible to me! Very nicely done! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 9/1/2015 4:22:00 AM
thank you so much Andie for seeing my poem a worthy winner.. =')!
Date: 8/11/2015 2:27:00 AM
That's deep. ..SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2015 4:21:00 AM
not much Skat.. ;)
Date: 8/9/2015 7:40:00 PM
This is lovely and quite an emotional haiku, Olive Eloisa. It perfectly matches the accompanying image!... Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 9/1/2015 4:20:00 AM
thank you so much Kelly.. =')
Date: 8/4/2015 7:23:00 AM
lovely imagery for this lune, Olive. hugs!
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:49:00 AM
thanks much Kim and hugs back!!... =')
Date: 8/3/2015 5:05:00 PM
Very descriptive lines that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visits to my page.Sara
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:48:00 AM
Sara, I'm on and off in Soup because of having not enough time hence when I have I try to go to poets included in my list to read.. =')!!! When I read your poems they soothe me Sara.. and they leave me awed!~Olive hugs!
Date: 8/3/2015 4:13:00 PM
Love this beautiful haiku (Lune) Olive_eloi. It goes very well with the visual, too. gl in the contest. hugs // paul
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Date: 8/5/2015 1:31:00 AM
THanks much PAul, there are two that caught my attentions however the second one I got some hard time forming the words so I settled on this.. hugs back! thanks!
Date: 8/3/2015 1:44:00 PM
Olive, your lune drips with beauty, beautifully penned
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Date: 8/5/2015 1:21:00 AM
So is yours Broken WIngs.. =')!!!
Date: 8/3/2015 1:21:00 PM
Your word choices define what you wish to capture and you convey these emotions well. Emile.
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Date: 8/4/2015 1:31:00 AM
first time I saw the first Image this the muse that came.. ! Im thinking of the #7 but am thinking twice.. =') thanks..
Date: 8/2/2015 3:26:00 PM
- Beautifully written, dear Olive - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 1:24:00 AM
thank you so much Anne Lise.. Im glad you find it beautiful.. =")
Date: 8/2/2015 12:21:00 PM
The image captured so well in your Haiku Olive, love it, hugs//James xx
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Date: 8/3/2015 2:42:00 PM
Thanks much James..= ) hugs back..=')
Date: 8/2/2015 9:18:00 AM
oh so beautiful Olive - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2015 3:43:00 AM
thank you so much Jan.. =')hugs back!
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