Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Haiku

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Sash of Tears: Lune

SASH OF TEARS

The frigid air
suffocates slow the crimson heart:
sash of tears...
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Pretty Little Lunes - Poetry Contest
Sponsor Name - Andrea Dietrich

Olive Eloisa Guillermo
9:50 pm, August 02, 2015

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Marvin G. Celestial August 29, 2015 at 10:23 AM I like this the most! Congratz for being a lifetime member here Olive! Proud to be Pinoy!

Sandra Haight August 21, 2015 at 12:24 PM Olive, so beautifully written. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

James Inman August 19, 2015 at 12:18 PM Gorgeous write, Olive. So sad but so beautiful.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 16, 2015 at 11:06 PM What a wonderful imagery dear Olive! Congrats on big win!

Kim Merryman August 16, 2015 at 10:30 PM Beautifully written, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A August 16, 2015 at 8:44 PM Hi Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Skat A August 16, 2015 at 1:39 AM Olive, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 3:33 AM thanks much Skat.. =`)

Jan Allison August 15, 2015 at 7:29 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Olive:-) hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 3:31 AM thank you so much.. =`)

Casarah Nance August 15, 2015 at 7:14 AM Beautifully said and matches the picture so perfectly, glad to see this one on the winners list! Grats Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 1, 2015 at 4:26 AM thanks much Cassie.. =")

Paul Callus August 15, 2015 at 5:47 AM Congratulations on yet another podium win, Olive_eloi! ~ Hope you are enjoying your heart-throbbing treat:) Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 1, 2015 at 4:25 AM thank you so much PAul.. as always I try my best to pass a write.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2015 at 1:04 AM this picture probably produced the most beautiful of the poems in general, Olive, and that sash of tears was just so incredible to me! Very nicely done! Congrats in my contest. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 1, 2015 at 4:22 AM thank you so much Andie for seeing my poem a worthy winner.. =')!

Skat A August 11, 2015 at 2:27 AM That's deep. ..SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 1, 2015 at 4:21 AM not much Skat.. ;)

Kelly Deschler August 9, 2015 at 7:40 PM This is lovely and quite an emotional haiku, Olive Eloisa. It perfectly matches the accompanying image!... Good luck in the contest! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 1, 2015 at 4:20 AM thank you so much Kelly.. =')

Kp Nunez August 4, 2015 at 7:23 AM lovely imagery for this lune, Olive. hugs! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:49 AM thanks much Kim and hugs back!!... =')

Sara Kendrick August 3, 2015 at 5:05 PM Very descriptive lines that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visits to my page.Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:48 AM Sara, I'm on and off in Soup because of having not enough time hence when I have I try to go to poets included in my list to read.. =')!!! When I read your poems they soothe me Sara.. and they leave me awed!~Olive hugs!

Paul Callus August 3, 2015 at 4:13 PM Love this beautiful haiku (Lune) Olive_eloi. It goes very well with the visual, too. gl in the contest. hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 1:31 AM THanks much PAul, there are two that caught my attentions however the second one I got some hard time forming the words so I settled on this.. hugs back! thanks!

Constance La France August 3, 2015 at 1:44 PM Olive, your lune drips with beauty, beautifully penned Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 1:21 AM So is yours Broken WIngs.. =')!!!

Emile Pinet August 3, 2015 at 1:21 PM Your word choices define what you wish to capture and you convey these emotions well. Emile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 4, 2015 at 1:31 AM first time I saw the first Image this the muse that came.. ! Im thinking of the #7 but am thinking twice.. =') thanks..

Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2015 at 3:26 PM - Beautifully written, dear Olive - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 4, 2015 at 1:24 AM thank you so much Anne Lise.. Im glad you find it beautiful.. =")

James Fraser August 2, 2015 at 12:21 PM The image captured so well in your Haiku Olive, love it, hugs//James xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 3, 2015 at 2:42 PM Thanks much James..= ) hugs back..=')

Jan Allison August 2, 2015 at 9:18 AM oh so beautiful Olive - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 3, 2015 at 3:43 AM thank you so much Jan.. =')hugs back!