Lewis Caroll is one of my favourite Poets and Jabberwocky one of my favourite poems. I like the use imagination and inventiveness and the use of made up words.
Sardines on the Sand Two Sardines danced hand in hand At their wedding upon the sand As a Herring played the violin. A portly porpoise clothed in grey Greeted guests from far away. A pair of Cod beheld the scene, The bride was dressed in seaweed green And an Octopus sang a gliforal song As the assembly wept into oyster shells, While an elderly Crab played whale bone bells. A gumley Anchovy bore the ring As the Vicar asked the choir to sing. Then a choir of Kipper sang on the strand, And throngs of Mullet from far and wide Danced by that strong mantigious tide. Then there came a flumifinous roar As the tide surged upon that shore And all the party were swept away. All on that bright framtitious day. 19/08/16 For the contest 'In the Style of my Favourite Poet. Sponsored by The Seeker
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