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Sardines

Through the water they glide, an immense mosaic of millions of silvery fish on their migratory run, obeying a call immemorial, a mystery of aquatic unison choreographed by instinct primordial. They billow, a grainy smoke cloud in which light drowns. A ruffling, like an enormous bedspread being shaken out in slow motion by an invisible giant. They turn into a mesh, glistening, spinning around, tightening, a net woven with fish for catching water. They stretch, a submerged galaxy unspooling into a braided rope in a blue universe. They bank, and silver ripples across the shoal, a wheat field touched by a soaking breeze. Then they move on, flashing by, like underwater rain falling sideways. Before the predators get to them, my eyes are feasting.

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Date: 2/15/2018 8:21:00 AM
What a beautiful feast for my eyes, Bernard. A definite FAVE for me.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/16/2018 4:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line. Really appreciate it.
Date: 8/9/2017 8:04:00 PM
Vivid imagery!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 8/9/2017 8:57:00 PM
Thank you, Anita. Glad you liked it :)

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