Sarah and Amy's Hamsters
When the sadness of her hamster
doesn't last
she lasts for just a couple years
and then her sadness became her eyes
that when the hamster died
she didn't know how about this
is different than her dreams
So then she must be very sad
(and now it's talking about the other one)
and now she died in the blue fields of dreams
and dreams of sourness all down her eyes
tears of cosmos all down her eyes.
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