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SAPPHIRE EYES SAVED ME Wrap me within sapphire eyes that saved me Caress my thoughts as my lips kiss your all Softly, hold me as you set my spirit free Fingers meet unveiling your secrets thee, in misty eyes, do quest for love's fine goal. Wrap me within sapphire eyes that saved me tongueless tones-- thirst the fire of liberty love memories blow thy mundane doubts troll Softly, hold me as you set my spirit free A single smile can flood my soul with glee let your eyes mirror my life substance role. Wrap me within sapphire eyes that saved me, the longevity of our stare marks history for no thorns nor cross can collapse our control Softly, hold me as you set my spirit free! When trials rain, point my heart to victory as I gaze to your eyes, I am consoled Wrap me within sapphire eyes that saved me, softly hold me as you set my spirit free! ________________________________________________ ++CONTEST NAME: SCREWED VI++ ++Contest Sponsor: Rob++ ~~3rd place~~ ©Olive Eloisa Guillermo 11:03 pm, March 13, 2015

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Michael Tor

Date: 9/28/2015 10:32:00 PM

Olive my favorite congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/28/2015 12:41:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Olive!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2015 8:54:00 PM

sweet and beautiful, Olive. Congrats on your win this time!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/27/2015 7:02:00 PM

Olive, congratulations on your win!!!!Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/27/2015 9:26:00 AM

Olive, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Tammy Reams

Date: 9/27/2015 8:45:00 AM

Congrats on your win Olive!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/19/2015 4:40:00 AM

thanks much Tammy,, =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/13/2015 5:54:00 PM

What an enjoyable romantic poem, Olive_eloi, written in one of my fav forms! Sapphire eyes that can melt any heart...even that of a dinosaur! Top marks for you! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 3:14:00 AM

weeee so this time we have same fave Paul as Villanelle is one of my fave forms too.. :)! weeee.. :) hahahhaha oh yes a big dinosaur will melt!!!.. :D! hugs back.. :)! /// olive eloisa

Tim Smith

Date: 3/13/2015 4:29:00 PM

A single smile can flood my soul with glee..love that line Olive as I do your poem : ) ... hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 3:12:00 AM

thanks much Tim.. :) I love that line too.. :) hugs back.. :) Happy Weekend.. :)!

James Fraser

Date: 3/13/2015 3:20:00 PM

The first line is a wow, followed by a beautiful romantic poem. Dino blue eyes loves this lovely poetry Oliz, hugs aplenty and more//James ;-) xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 3:08:00 AM

Hahaha.. but hey James!!! if there is a chicken on wrap weeeee kindly throw some for me, i wanna have a bite.. :P! :D loools!

James Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 1:18:00 PM

I like the word wrap also, especially if there's chicken in it ;-) hugs always ;-) xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 8:51:00 AM

:) I always wanted to make a poem with the word wrap in it.. :)! it's one of my few fave words... :) thanks for dropping by and reading my poem Dino James.. :)!! hugs back!//olive eloisa

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2015 11:40:00 AM

what a tender romantic write with wonderful imagery - sapphire eyes oh sparkling blue like gemstones - how glorious a description:-) 7 xx :-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/13/2015 7:57:00 PM

thanks much Jan.. :) weeee hugs back too