Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Villanelle

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Sapphire Eyes Saved Me

SAPPHIRE EYES SAVED ME

Wrap me within sapphire eyes that saved me
Caress my thoughts as my lips kiss your all
Softly, hold me as you set my spirit free

Fingers meet unveiling your secrets thee,
in misty eyes, do quest for love's fine goal.
Wrap me within sapphire eyes that saved me

tongueless tones-- thirst the fire of liberty
love memories blow thy mundane doubts troll
Softly, hold me as you set my spirit free

A single smile can flood my soul with glee
let your eyes mirror my life substance role.
Wrap me within sapphire eyes that saved me,

the longevity of our stare marks history
for no thorns nor cross can collapse our control
Softly, hold me as you set my spirit free!

When trials rain, point my heart to victory
as I gaze to your eyes, I am consoled
Wrap me within sapphire eyes that saved me,
softly hold me as you set my spirit free!
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++CONTEST NAME: SCREWED VI++
++Contest Sponsor: Rob++
~~3rd place~~
©Olive Eloisa  Guillermo
11:03  pm, March 13, 2015

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Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 10:32 PM Olive my favorite congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 28, 2015 at 12:41 AM Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Olive!

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2015 at 8:54 PM sweet and beautiful, Olive. Congrats on your win this time!

Eve Roper September 27, 2015 at 7:02 PM Olive, congratulations on your win!!!!Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y. September 27, 2015 at 9:26 AM Olive, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Tammy Reams September 27, 2015 at 8:45 AM Congrats on your win Olive! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 19, 2015 at 4:40 AM thanks much Tammy,, =`)

Paul Callus March 13, 2015 at 5:54 PM What an enjoyable romantic poem, Olive_eloi, written in one of my fav forms! Sapphire eyes that can melt any heart...even that of a dinosaur! Top marks for you! Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 15, 2015 at 3:14 AM weeee so this time we have same fave Paul as Villanelle is one of my fave forms too.. :)! weeee.. :) hahahhaha oh yes a big dinosaur will melt!!!.. :D! hugs back.. :)! /// olive eloisa

Tim Smith March 13, 2015 at 4:29 PM A single smile can flood my soul with glee..love that line Olive as I do your poem : ) ... hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 15, 2015 at 3:12 AM thanks much Tim.. :) I love that line too.. :) hugs back.. :) Happy Weekend.. :)!

James Fraser March 13, 2015 at 3:20 PM The first line is a wow, followed by a beautiful romantic poem. Dino blue eyes loves this lovely poetry Oliz, hugs aplenty and more//James ;-) xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 15, 2015 at 3:08 AM Hahaha.. but hey James!!! if there is a chicken on wrap weeeee kindly throw some for me, i wanna have a bite.. :P! :D loools! James Fraser March 14, 2015 at 1:18 PM I like the word wrap also, especially if there's chicken in it ;-) hugs always ;-) xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 14, 2015 at 8:51 AM :) I always wanted to make a poem with the word wrap in it.. :)! it's one of my few fave words... :) thanks for dropping by and reading my poem Dino James.. :)!! hugs back!//olive eloisa

Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 11:40 AM what a tender romantic write with wonderful imagery - sapphire eyes oh sparkling blue like gemstones - how glorious a description:-) 7 xx :-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 13, 2015 at 7:57 PM thanks much Jan.. :) weeee hugs back too