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Sapphire Eyes

sestet Ushered in by smiles, blue eyes beguile; sweet luxury begs your company. In sync, our bodies sway quite by choice; dancing old style, making time worthwhile. Soft hands guarantee to calm my sea, your sapphire eyes speak, a settled voice. August 30, 2019 Writing Challenge 4, August 2019 - Six Lines Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 9/3/2019 3:34:00 PM
Reason, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this dreamy rhyming poem, well done !
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Date: 9/4/2019 1:46:00 PM
I return thanks to you for the honor of a placement, a fun write with a person in mind. Appreciate the comment.
Date: 9/2/2019 5:28:00 PM
lovely and sensual Reason, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/3/2019 8:17:00 AM
thanks, Jan, appreciate the comment. Ol' Blue Eyes (Sinatra) has nothing on my sweetheart whose blue eyes shine into his seventies.
Date: 9/2/2019 12:25:00 PM
- Lovely written, R.A.P. - it give me a pretty picture :) - Congratulations on your great 3nd place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:40:00 PM
Glad for the lovely comment, Sunshine. Thanks for the encouragement.
Date: 9/2/2019 11:36:00 AM
congrats! A beautiful poem
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Date: 9/3/2019 8:19:00 AM
thank you, Jeanne, nice comment.
Date: 9/2/2019 11:13:00 AM
Wow this was beautiful! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 9/3/2019 8:19:00 AM
thank you, Brenda, glad you saw the beauty.

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