Sapphire Eyes

sestet

Ushered in by smiles, blue eyes beguile;
sweet luxury begs your company.
In sync, our bodies sway quite by choice;
dancing old style, making time worthwhile.
Soft hands guarantee to calm my sea,
your sapphire eyes speak, a settled voice.


August 30, 2019
Writing Challenge 4, August 2019 - Six Lines
Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode
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La France Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Reason, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this dreamy rhyming poem, well done !
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September 4, 2019 at 1:46 PM
I return thanks to you for the honor of a placement, a fun write with a person in mind. Appreciate the comment.
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 5:28 PM
lovely and sensual Reason, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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September 3, 2019 at 8:17 AM
thanks, Jan, appreciate the comment. Ol' Blue Eyes (Sinatra) has nothing on my sweetheart whose blue eyes shine into his seventies.
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 12:25 PM
- Lovely written, R.A.P. - it give me a pretty picture :) - Congratulations on your great 3nd place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 2, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Glad for the lovely comment, Sunshine. Thanks for the encouragement.
Mcgee Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 11:36 AM
congrats! A beautiful poem
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September 3, 2019 at 8:19 AM
thank you, Jeanne, nice comment.
Chiri Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 11:13 AM
Wow this was beautiful! Congrats on your win!;)
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September 3, 2019 at 8:19 AM
thank you, Brenda, glad you saw the beauty.
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