Sapphire

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For Bitesize Poem No.86 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

I gazed into a multi-colored sapphire, bright. Its sparkles made my brain and heart take flight. In a single instant, I was transported - Some kinds of magic are never thwarted. On an endless, timeless loop, I swiftly sailed, As nature's enchanting majesty prevailed.

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Tom Woody

Date: 4/20/2024 10:35:00 AM

Let's hope your fantasy didn't land you in Elbonia!

David Crandall
Date: 4/20/2024 12:17:00 PM

haha, I remember Dilbert!

Ink Empress

Date: 4/20/2024 5:01:00 AM

This is so beautiful and ethereal how youv delivered this dear david. The way youv painted imagery to express here is beyond impeccable! “On an endless, timeless loop, I swiftly sailed, As nature's enchanting majesty prevailed.” Brilliant ending too! Pleasure reading this poetic gem!

David Crandall
Date: 4/20/2024 10:18:00 AM

Thanks Ink! It's great to hear such nice words about my poem.