Sapana

Sadhai sadhai Biyan uthera mo 
sapana herchu
Bholi palta feri mo uthera hijo ko 
sapana ferchu
Sabai jastai mo jitna ta khozchu
Tara kahile harchu ki bhaney kura 
kina sochchu


Aakash lai patal ma launu kasto 
lagcha
Garnu ta Kati le khozcha Tara sabai 
thakcha 
Garnu Ta sabai le sakcha
Tara garnu bhanda agadi nai yo 
soch nai bhagcha
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May 19, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Shaliendra, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 19, 2014 at 3:51 AM
Shailendra, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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May 18, 2014 at 2:29 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. Hope you find much support here. Comment on the poems of other members and they will return the favor. Best wishes.
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May 18, 2014 at 11:20 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Shailendra :) - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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