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Santas Many Helpers

Santas little helpers were busy having fun Wrapping and labelling the presents ready for the Xmas run The reindeer had their coats washed smelt of lavender and things The sleigh had been revarnished was now bright and glowing. The reigns were now polished as a surprise for Santa Claus So he would look the kiddy not a drab old droopy drawers The presents were in the sack, in house order for delivery Santa admired his reigns not realising they were slippery. He jerked the reigns as a nod for the reindeers" To start their pulling then it happened, oh dear The reigns slipped through Santa's fingers reindeer were off at speed Luckily thomas was out with his tank engine knew he had to try and stop the steeds He puffed along the track shouting at Santa to hang on tight Then disappeared into a tunnel giving Santa such a fright The minions were out in their millions pulling on the reigns to stop the race While batman flew in voicing his opinion that a race at Xmas wasn't the place Said to the minions you want to help, Santa is exhausted not in the mood to yo ho ho ho Deliver these presents off you go but be quiet those children mustn't know But if you peeped and saw yellow Santas Instead of the usual red one It's the minions helping out until the presents are all gone. Santa is snoring now he has had a stressful day Think before you do more than help it sometimes doesn't pay . Penned 26 November 2014

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Date: 12/7/2014 9:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this imaginative poem Serena.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 5:52:00 PM
thank you Brenda .....Seren
Date: 12/6/2014 10:41:00 AM
very nice poem seren nice to see you are writing still
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 5:53:00 PM
Hello Kasim thank you for your congrats....Seren
Date: 12/6/2014 8:52:00 AM
Quite the tale, congratulations.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 5:53:00 PM
Hi Richard, Many thanks ......Seren
Date: 12/6/2014 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Seren, a great story. Blessings Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/10/2014 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, his my Yorkie, Peanut, I wrote a couple of poems about him
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 5:54:00 PM
Thanks Eve...Oooh love the pic of your dog...Seren
Date: 12/6/2014 8:43:00 AM
wonderful and creative one, congrats on the win
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 5:57:00 PM
Hello Ram thanks so much for the congrats ....Seren
Date: 12/5/2014 9:37:00 PM
A great story and moral. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 5:57:00 PM
Hello Joyce...thank you so much....Seren
Date: 12/5/2014 9:25:00 PM
Everyone be GOOD and helping, that's what true Christmas is! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 5:55:00 PM
Hi Debbie.....lovely to see you, many thx ...Seren
Date: 12/5/2014 5:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Seren!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 5:56:00 PM
Thank you Maurice ....Seren
Date: 12/5/2014 4:00:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your win Seren:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 11/26/2014 8:31:00 PM
Love it sweetie, enjoyed reading it...lots!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/27/2014 7:03:00 PM
Thanks Maurice....was a fun write ....Seren
Date: 11/26/2014 7:59:00 PM
How wonderful Seren.....Hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/27/2014 7:03:00 PM
Thanks Tim glad u liked it.....Seren p.s. nice pic
Date: 11/26/2014 9:27:00 AM
Now this is a wonderful Christmas story perfect for little ears. I would give this a one right here. Unfortunately I can't so I will give you a 7 and fav.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/27/2014 7:04:00 PM
Awwww Brenda your so kind , Thanks for being so gracious.....Seren
Date: 11/26/2014 4:21:00 AM
a charming tale with wonderful imagery Seren:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/27/2014 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Jan tried incorporating other children favourites....... Seren

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