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Date written: 12/07/2020

Santa Claus goes down the chimney and pays the price; he ain't skinny. He's tightly wedged down the hole, yelling not Ho! Ho! Ho! Ouch, that's gonna bruise a kidney!

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/14/2023 3:35:00 PM

Ha Ha Edward: Too many Christmas cookies for Santa, He’ll have to learn to say NO NO NO. LOL SuZ

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/15/2023 4:59:00 PM

LOL, I concur, Suzanne! Thanks for the lovely visit!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2023 1:25:00 PM

Congrats again. Looks to me like this may have been from one of my contests long ago looking at what I said to you a few years ago. This remains an awesome limerick.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/15/2023 4:57:00 PM

Thank you very much indeed, Andrea:-) Happy holidays!

Joseph May

Date: 12/13/2023 1:34:00 PM

Ouch, Nicely done Edward, Congrats on your win

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/13/2023 7:18:00 PM

Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Joseph:-) Happy holidays!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/13/2023 12:29:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this cute Limerick write again. I can see it happening... Have a fun day..........

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/13/2023 7:17:00 PM

Thanks for the congrats and revisit, Paula:-) Happy holidays!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2021 9:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win , Edward , great limerick . Hugs Eve

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/27/2021 8:40:00 AM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and revisit, Eve:-) Happy holidays!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/26/2021 2:40:00 PM

Your "Santa Yells For Help" is a cute write and picture. Boy does he need some help. Have a Blessed Day......................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/26/2021 2:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula:-) Happy holidays!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/25/2021 12:51:00 PM

Haha! Poor Santa.. too many Christmas cookies! Your limerick is wonderful fun, Edward. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes for a merry Christmas.. ~Susan

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/25/2021 8:28:00 PM

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Susan:-) Merry Christmas!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/24/2021 8:01:00 PM

Hi Edward, Poor Santa, congratulations on your winning. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your loved ones. Have a good evening;-)Alexis

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/25/2021 8:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Alexis:-) Same to you and yours!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2021 4:22:00 PM

I did not even notice until just now that you even used near rhymes in the middle. That's how good this was. It was just a really cute limerick with great meter. Congrats in my contest, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/25/2021 8:23:00 PM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and my placement , Andrea:-) Merry Christmas!