Edward Ibeh Poet Limerick

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Date written: 12/07/2020

Santa Yells For Help

Santa Claus goes down the chimney
 and pays the price; he ain't skinny.
 He's tightly wedged down the hole,
          yelling not Ho! Ho! Ho!
 Ouch, that's gonna bruise a kidney!

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Suzanne Delaney December 14, 2023 at 3:35 PM Ha Ha Edward: Too many Christmas cookies for Santa, He’ll have to learn to say NO NO NO. LOL SuZ Edward Ibeh December 15, 2023 at 4:59 PM LOL, I concur, Suzanne! Thanks for the lovely visit!

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2023 at 1:25 PM Congrats again. Looks to me like this may have been from one of my contests long ago looking at what I said to you a few years ago. This remains an awesome limerick. Edward Ibeh December 15, 2023 at 4:57 PM Thank you very much indeed, Andrea:-) Happy holidays!

Joseph May December 13, 2023 at 1:34 PM Ouch, Nicely done Edward, Congrats on your win Edward Ibeh December 13, 2023 at 7:18 PM Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Joseph:-) Happy holidays!

Paula Goldsmith December 13, 2023 at 12:29 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this cute Limerick write again. I can see it happening... Have a fun day.......... Edward Ibeh December 13, 2023 at 7:17 PM Thanks for the congrats and revisit, Paula:-) Happy holidays!

Eve Roper December 26, 2021 at 9:46 PM Congratulations on your win , Edward , great limerick . Hugs Eve Edward Ibeh December 27, 2021 at 8:40 AM Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and revisit, Eve:-) Happy holidays!

Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2021 at 2:40 PM Your "Santa Yells For Help" is a cute write and picture. Boy does he need some help. Have a Blessed Day...................... Edward Ibeh December 26, 2021 at 2:51 PM Thank you very much, Paula:-) Happy holidays!

Susan Ashley December 25, 2021 at 12:51 PM Haha! Poor Santa.. too many Christmas cookies! Your limerick is wonderful fun, Edward. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes for a merry Christmas.. ~Susan Edward Ibeh December 25, 2021 at 8:28 PM Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Susan:-) Merry Christmas!

Alexis Y. December 24, 2021 at 8:01 PM Hi Edward, Poor Santa, congratulations on your winning. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your loved ones. Have a good evening;-)Alexis Edward Ibeh December 25, 2021 at 8:26 PM Thank you so much, Alexis:-) Same to you and yours!

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2021 at 4:22 PM I did not even notice until just now that you even used near rhymes in the middle. That's how good this was. It was just a really cute limerick with great meter. Congrats in my contest, Edward. Edward Ibeh December 25, 2021 at 8:23 PM Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and my placement , Andrea:-) Merry Christmas!

Bobby May December 19, 2020 at 7:07 AM Hahaha, this is GREAT! Edward Ibeh December 19, 2020 at 7:44 AM Thank you so much, Bobby:-)

Eve Roper December 17, 2020 at 6:52 AM Hahaha, good one, Edward. Merry Christmas my friend. Hugs Eve Edward Ibeh December 17, 2020 at 9:07 AM Thank you, Eve:-) I'm glad it made you laugh!

Kim Rodrigues December 17, 2020 at 4:29 AM Too funny along with the merry ho ho ho picture! Edward Ibeh December 17, 2020 at 9:06 AM Thank you for the wonderful visit, Kim:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu December 16, 2020 at 11:04 AM Hello Edward, yes Santa does need help. Merry Christmas. Happy New Year. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 16, 2020 at 3:22 PM Hello Edward, you are welcome my friend. Merry Christmas. and Happy New Year. My friend enjoy your evening . Edward Ibeh December 16, 2020 at 11:44 AM Thanks for the wonderful visit as always, Darlene:-) Happy holidays. my friend!