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Santa Used An Emergency Parachute

Twas the night before Christmas
    Dressed in my red Santa pajamas.
  Tap, Tap, Tap, and a whispered strain;
     Santa knocked at my windowpane. 

  Dressed in a red velvet hat and suit, 
    Lined in white fur, a black belt and boots. 
  His hair, so white I had to stare; 
    His breath puffing white in the chilly air. 

  "Sorry, but you've no chimney, that's plain 
    To see, and I know this is insane."
  "Rudolph, the Red-Nosed Reindeer
     Hollered as we hung in the air."

  "Santa, use your big magic charm bags
     To deliver the gifts with name tags."
  "It takes time to deliver gifts from dusk to dawn. 
    I emerged in a parachute to land on the lawn."

  I said, "That's okay, Santa, I'm totally pleased 
    I'll give you a squeeze, I'm not displeased."
  "I thought delivering you had different shifts, 
    I was wondering how I'd get my gifts."


11/28/2022
The Night Before 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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May Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 6:49 AM
Congrats on your win Eve, Wonderful write, Merry Christmas
Alex Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 7:55 PM
Exciting writing and a very beautiful Santa scene is created. Congratulations!
Romios Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 12:33 PM
Best wishes, Eve. This is one of your best, I am FAVING, delightful! Creative and a moving image! You go girl! Impeccable verses. Christmas hugs, Pangie
Daniel Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 2:09 AM
Cute and fun:)
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 3:40 PM
this is adorable, Eve. This line right here was super cute with its internal rhyme: I'll give you a squeeze, I'm not displeased."
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 9:47 AM
Cute, Eve, and I love the video!
DiMino Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 9:05 AM
Delightful! Santa finds a way...as does our loving God. Blessings my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 5:28 AM
Great fantasy. Loved it.
George Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 2:10 AM
This is so cute and highly imaginative ! The poem and the picture are equally beautiful. I wish you all the Best in the contest dear Eve !
Cunningham Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 12:18 AM
Any which way, he always delivers lol. Good luck in the contest Eve. Tom
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