Santa Sleeps

Santa snores
Chin bobbing
Teeth whistling

Elves laughing
At the sight
Rudolf snorts

Awakened
By the noise
In bad mood

Contest sponsored by Charles Messina
Charlieku 3-3-3 contest

Penned 16/12/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 5:07 PM
Whoa!! Santa was not in a good mood for Christmas this year? Oh! No!! Enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 12:49 PM
fun one, Seren. Wishing you a blessed NEw Year and congrats on your win
Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 11:52 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Seren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 7:23 PM
This one made me laugh out loud. A great job with this Charlieku, Seren. Congratulations on your placement and I wish you a very Happy New Year. Charlie
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:39 PM
what fun imagery Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 5:32 PM
I'm laughing at the snort
Sands Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:46 PM
LOL. Cute! :)
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