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Santa off to Minnesota

Santa is on the road, ready to fly. It’s raining in Minnesota, no lie. He scratches his snowy beard with a sigh. Reindeer and sleigh will not get very high. Kids must get their gifts so he says goodbye to Mrs. Claus and the elves that certify the flight though it’s raining tonight. Red-eye of chief elf unique, it breaches each sky. Gifts must be delivered by North Pole guy. It’s raining, no snow, unusual sky with Minnesota travel that’s bone dry of flurries. Request of Santa’s supply though the weather is not frightful, no lie. He came. He went. Cookies and milk bye-bye.

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Date: 12/25/2023 5:59:00 PM
I head that the sled was held up by a bunch of elves chanting 'From the River to the Sea, That's how much we need to pee.' ~ee-hee
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2023 7:58:00 PM
Oh no…shaking head. Perhaps some received their dues.
Date: 12/25/2023 4:45:00 PM
clever and light hearted. I enjoyed it. Hope you had a splendid Christmas, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2023 5:03:00 PM
Thank you and you too, sweet poet!
Date: 12/25/2023 9:39:00 AM
Cute one , Kim. Was it supposed to post twice? Merry Christmas to you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2023 10:29:00 AM
Fixed the problem! Thank you! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/25/2023 8:52:00 AM
Lovely tribute to a Santa that will not be mute, got to get that future virtuoso her flute -- his mission...and love...unstoppable -- rain is reindeer mop-able. Mrs. Santa is very proud I would imagine. Merry Christmas to all the Kim loving clan. Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2023 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joe, for adding cheer! :) Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Date: 12/25/2023 7:18:00 AM
I hope Santa's had an umbrella..thisbisnlovely storytelling...I replay enjoyed reading it..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2023 10:31:00 AM
Thank you! We can keep our memories in poetic form! Merry Christmas, my friend!

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