Viv Wigley Poet Rhyme

Santa I Want

Santa, I want a killer shark
but one that breathes in air
and fitted with some roller skates
to get from here to there.
Armed with a sub machine gun
and grenades and all that stuff
'coz John next door he bullies me
and  I've about had enough.


For contest 'Dear Santa I want', sponsor Kevin Shaw

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Mick Talbot January 2, 2018 at 7:56 PM Congreatulations Viv! Many thanks for sharing, have a great 2018, Mick!

Line Gauthier January 2, 2018 at 10:44 AM Wow - well deserved win. Awesome, Viv. Congrats!

Melissa Tracy December 30, 2017 at 12:23 PM Congrats on your win, Viv! Captured beautifully through children's eyes, joyful yet sorrowful bullying starts so young! Captivating creative write, I enjoyed reading :) Viv Wigley December 31, 2017 at 1:02 AM Thanks, Melissa, sadly you're right, bullying and controlling does start young, and not always nipped in the bud in time. Viv x

Mike Gentile December 30, 2017 at 11:35 AM Congratulations Viv!! Viv Wigley December 31, 2017 at 1:02 AM Thanks, Mike, have a good new year. Regards, Viv

Kim Rodrigues December 29, 2017 at 10:01 PM An invention worth having ;) Congrats! Viv Wigley December 31, 2017 at 1:03 AM Indeed, Kim, I can hear the cello as it comes up the street. Der-dum.....der-um....dum dum dum dum....

Sneha Rv December 29, 2017 at 8:29 PM Oh this is genius. Congratulations on your wonderful win!! :) Viv Wigley December 31, 2017 at 1:03 AM Thanks, Sneha, have a lovely new year. Viv x

Agnes Krampe December 29, 2017 at 3:51 PM Congrats on your top win, Viv. I really enjoyed your poem. Viv Wigley December 31, 2017 at 1:03 AM Thanks, Agnes, glad you enjoyed it. Have a lovely new year. Viv x

Sandra Haight December 29, 2017 at 3:33 PM A great poem, Viv! Congratulations on your 1st place podium win in the contest! Sandra Viv Wigley December 31, 2017 at 1:04 AM Thanks, Sandra, a pleasant surprise. Have a great new year. Viv x

Eve Roper December 29, 2017 at 1:12 PM Congratulations on your win, Viv.. love your way of thinking . Hugs eve Viv Wigley December 31, 2017 at 1:04 AM Thanks, Eve, have a lovely new year x

Jan Allison December 29, 2017 at 1:03 PM ha ha ha great one Mr Viv it reminds me of a cartoon character or the inventor of gadgets for a very young James Bond lol:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Curtis Johnson December 29, 2017 at 10:09 AM Hi Viv. Great one. Congrats on your top placement, but I am feeling sorry for John who must have moved out by now. Viv Wigley December 31, 2017 at 1:05 AM Thanks Curtis, a great weapon, but would smell a bit in summer. Regards, Viv

CayCay Godwin December 29, 2017 at 9:06 AM Congratulations! It is truly funny, most enjoyable. All the best ... CayCay Viv Wigley December 31, 2017 at 1:05 AM Thanks, CayCay, have a lovely new year, Viv x

Jean Murray December 7, 2017 at 4:20 AM Boys will be boys! I wish I knew you then Viv because I love to laugh and you never fail me. Viv Wigley December 7, 2017 at 9:58 AM Delighted to have that 'Lynx' effect, Jean. Mwah! x

Rhoda Tripp December 3, 2017 at 7:12 PM Oh, Viv! This is great! The imagery is spot on! Love it! Rhoda Tripp December 5, 2017 at 11:13 AM Lol. Me too! Viv Wigley December 5, 2017 at 12:41 AM Yes, Rhoda, there's a little kid inside me, who occasionally bursts out. WAAAHHH! x

Andrea Dietrich December 3, 2017 at 5:15 PM EXCELLENT. I love how you did it and made it sound just like how a young boy would write it! Viv Wigley December 5, 2017 at 12:40 AM I think as kids we all had those little 'weapons of mass destruction' moments with someone, or maybe just wanting a tree to fall on them, like in a Warner brothers cartoon. Thanks for dropping by, Andrea,Viv x

Carole Duet December 2, 2017 at 12:50 AM Hahaha...I can just see this. It's like reading a cartoon. Viv Wigley December 3, 2017 at 2:16 AM Thanks, Carole, I'm sure there are a lot of kids who wish for similar. Viv x

Arthur Vaso December 1, 2017 at 2:30 AM Know I have been in those shoes, great write! Viv Wigley December 3, 2017 at 2:17 AM Thanks Arthur yes, when I was at junior school a lad picked on me and my pal until one winters day when he was wrestling my buddy to the ground, I lifted a slab of ice out of a puddle the size of a dinner plate and smashed him over the head with it. That did the trick. regards, Viv