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January 11, 2025, placed 3rd in Miranda Hawley's Christmas Tizzy contest

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Santa Got Stranded in Florida

The North Pole life can be so hard.
Poor Santa longed to take a break.
His missus told him, “Off we go
to Florida. It’s for your sake!”

While he lounged by the indoor pool,
she vamoosed with a young masseur
in Santa’s car with all his cash. 
This vicious blow he would endure.

He called Rudolph: “I’m stranded here.
I want to be back home TODAY.”
Eight reindeer dashed to Florida
to rescue him in his own sleigh.
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Hawley Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 6:14 PM
I need a Florida break! Well, congratulations on your win in my contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Congratulation on your win. Sorry, I am late. I took a couple of days off. I enjoyed reading your creative write/story. Glad the eight reindeer dashed to Florida to rescue him. Guess that made the kids happy. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Canerdy Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 4:39 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice
Woods Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Awe poor Santa! Very creative story! Congratulations! Xo
Canerdy Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 4:39 PM
Thanks so much, Crystol. Janice
Singh Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 9:13 PM
No one is immune to personal relationship challenges ! It's an interesting tale.
Canerdy Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Thanks so much, Akham. Janice
Proxenos Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 12:44 AM
Oh what a naughty wife Santa has, he is a very forgiving old chap.i Rudolph is his right hand always, and this time he used Santa's sleigh to resue him hope no children saw what was happening ha ha ha. Happy Christmas my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Canerdy Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Thanks a million, Jenifer. Merry Christmas! Janice
Bauer Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 11:59 AM
Ha! I very much enjoyed this, Janice! Have a wonderful holiday…
Canerdy Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 12:33 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 3:14 AM
Oh dear, what a nasty Mrs Claus she turned out to be lol. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas Janice. Tom
Tor Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 3:07 AM
Lol Janice Mrs Clause is such a naughty girl. Santa knows a good divorce attorney, lol...
Canerdy Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Yes, he does, Michael. Soon that hotshot lawyer will have Santa saying,"Ho ho ho"! Thanks for reading. Merry Christmas! Janice
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