Santa Got Stranded in Florida

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January 11, 2025, placed 3rd in Miranda Hawley's Christmas Tizzy contest

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The North Pole life can be so hard. Poor Santa longed to take a break. His missus told him, “Off we go to Florida. It’s for your sake!” While he lounged by the indoor pool, she vamoosed with a young masseur in Santa’s car with all his cash. This vicious blow he would endure. He called Rudolph: “I’m stranded here. I want to be back home TODAY.” Eight reindeer dashed to Florida to rescue him in his own sleigh.

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 1/17/2025 6:14:00 PM

I need a Florida break! Well, congratulations on your win in my contest.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/14/2025 9:58:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. Sorry, I am late. I took a couple of days off. I enjoyed reading your creative write/story. Glad the eight reindeer dashed to Florida to rescue him. Guess that made the kids happy. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/14/2025 4:39:00 PM

Thanks so much, Paula. Janice

Crystol Woods

Date: 1/12/2025 7:20:00 AM

Awe poor Santa! Very creative story! Congratulations! Xo

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/14/2025 4:39:00 PM

Thanks so much, Crystol. Janice

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 12/22/2024 9:13:00 PM

No one is immune to personal relationship challenges ! It's an interesting tale.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/23/2024 6:13:00 AM

Thanks so much, Akham. Janice

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/22/2024 12:44:00 AM

Oh what a naughty wife Santa has, he is a very forgiving old chap.i Rudolph is his right hand always, and this time he used Santa's sleigh to resue him hope no children saw what was happening ha ha ha. Happy Christmas my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/22/2024 12:36:00 PM

Thanks a million, Jenifer. Merry Christmas! Janice