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Santa drank too much sherry and fell off his sled There’ll be no gifts delivered, he’s staying in bed! One of three poems inspired by Cute Christmas Couplet Contest 12/19/18

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Date: 12/23/2018 12:48:00 PM
- It does not matter .... the kids have everything they need - Let Santa rest :) - Love this one, Jan :))) - Luck in the contest - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:12:00 PM
I agree with you Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/22/2018 12:10:00 PM
Oh that's so disappointing for this year I wanted santa to give me a really nice girlfriend, lol (just kidding), guess that I had to wait till next year, well good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:12:00 PM
hope Santa brings you your gift Faraz:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/20/2018 11:20:00 PM
Cant disappoint all those kids!!!! LOL
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:11:00 PM
true Arthur, kids of all ages lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/20/2018 11:19:00 PM
Rudolph though announced he'd pick up the slack so all gifts will be delivered kids, in Santa's red sack!
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:10:00 PM
lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/20/2018 5:01:00 PM
Santa better stick to cookies and milk. Lol Although a hot toddy is mighty tempting in the cold! Very cute Jan! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:09:00 PM
Yes a milky drink would be much better, drunk in charge of a sled is not a good idea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/20/2018 1:35:00 PM
While what happened to Santa is a humorous limerick please say it is only that because if he doesn't show I'll be sad and frightened by my own child's attitude! LOVE Jan-limericks ... CayCay
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Date: 12/20/2018 11:11:00 AM
Hi Jan, Santa does overdo it occasionally, what should we tell the children? Maybe he will make a New Years Eve delivery! Well done Jan, Hugs galore, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:07:00 PM
yes I guess he could come on a different day lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 11:12:00 PM
Cute Jan! Have a happy holiday and happy New year dear poet! Much love, james
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 7:20:00 PM
ha! very cute, jan!
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 6:40:00 PM
G'day Jan … from reading over 100 poems on this site on the Christmas site, it appears Santa needs to join Alcoholics Anonymous - thanks again Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:05:00 PM
lol Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 5:29:00 PM
Lol! Jan, What are the children going to do now? Good one:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:05:00 PM
who knows lol Its the parents I feel for when they find there are no gifts:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 11:52:00 AM
Ooh, poor Santa; that's a cute one.
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:04:00 PM
Thanks ML:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 11:27:00 AM
Who’s Sherry...lol! Love it, Dahling! You are so funny!
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:03:00 PM
lol Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 10:49:00 AM
Very funny and humorous, Jan. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 12/20/2018 2:52:00 PM
Thanks Subimal, this one is just for fun:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 10:24:00 AM
Very cute, Jan! Best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 12/20/2018 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Dale, I wrote 3 poems inspired by the contest this one is just for fun:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 10:19:00 AM
Oh dear!! I hope there is a substitute...I've been good all year round and it won't be fair if I missed out on my presents :) (am I being an egoist?) Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/20/2018 2:50:00 PM
Under your tree I can see a blue stripey T shirt tied up with a red ribbon Paul hee hee:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 8:13:00 AM
I always took Santa for an Eggnog drinker. :) Nice one Jan.
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Date: 12/20/2018 2:49:00 PM
Maybe he turned to drink because of the stress of Christmas:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 7:54:00 AM
Oh, poor Santa! I just hope he'll get well soon. :)
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Date: 12/20/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Kaveesha:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/19/2018 7:43:00 AM
Haha I blame the parents leaving him all that sherry. Tom.
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Date: 12/20/2018 2:46:00 PM
lol :-) hugs Jan xx

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