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Santa Clause and Frosty Taking In a Disney Show

After their work at the North Pole was done, 
Santa Claus and Frosty wanted some fun. 
Off to downtown they did go 
to take in a Disney Show. 
Santa called out the reindeer one by one.

Candy, popcorn, and drinks they did partake. 
At intermission - need for bathroom break. 
Santa gave a squeal of fright; 
he screamed a warning that night 
where Frosty hands were now only a flake.


11/30/2018

10 10 7 7 10 , 10 10 7 7 10 syllable count
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 12/5/2018 10:22:00 AM
Very funny poem, Eve. It got my mind's eye laughing w/the cool pic. Po' Frosty. Lol! Hilarious poem, my dear friend. Love and smiles and smiles of joy always.
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Date: 12/3/2018 9:45:00 AM
Back with congratulations Eve. Tom.
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Date: 12/3/2018 12:58:00 AM
- Enjoy reading this, Eve - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2018 10:46:00 PM
Cute... very cute.
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Date: 12/2/2018 8:32:00 PM
LOL very cute, Eve...Congrats on your win...Charlie
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Date: 12/2/2018 8:10:00 PM
oh no, is right!!! Great poem to go with that picture. BIG congrats, Eve.
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Date: 12/2/2018 5:11:00 PM
Haha..Congrats on your win Eve..
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Date: 12/2/2018 4:53:00 PM
YOU ARE good at limericks Eve, i recall the fun you used to have writing them with Sonny- believe in yourself my friend... if you ever need any help you know where i am:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/2/2018 12:29:00 PM
Ah, the picture posted with the limerick brings it into focus. Competition for this contest was awesome. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 12/2/2018 11:05:00 AM
Eve, so cute, love it, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 12/2/2018 6:07:00 AM
Ah that is so cute, the photo cracks me up. Glad to see you haven't lost the spirit though it must be hard, he must be loving you through the season I am sure. Sending you a heart hug and a mind prayer, what else can one do from far away. This is comment Sunday dear Eve. please leave a few extra comments on site today to help raise the community spirit, Love you xo
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Date: 11/30/2018 11:04:00 PM
Well penned, Eve.
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Date: 11/30/2018 8:41:00 PM
Haha, find a refrigerator quickly, well written Eve. Good luck. Tom.
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/30/2018 10:24:00 PM
Jan is the one that taught me, but I am not a funny person.. my husband and my sons are the ones with the humor..
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/30/2018 8:50:00 PM
It's a perfect limerick, when I started doing them my syllables were way out but folk on here put me right.
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/30/2018 8:43:00 PM
I not good at limericks Tom... Thank you
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