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Santa Clause has a more heroic deed and story, Which everyone might have missed to hear and see; He has been on service for a decade or yore, He's a wizened Santa and he cannot walk anymore. His reindeer are nowhere to be found, They went to breed, he keeps looking for them around; He has cataracts, so he cannot see them, He was operated…now, he has spectacles with thick lens. He is worried that his gifts will not be given on time, So, he sits hurriedly on his wheelchair drawn by snowman, But snowman keeps rolling while dragging him on the ground, He wishes that someone will pass by to get them quickly in town. Santa Clause has a brilliant idea on his mind, He remembers some balloons for children on his chair, behind; He blows them and takes some helium for snowman’s body, Now, you can hear them both saying “ho ho ho”-- flying happily. Christmas to New Year, you can still see him hovering on air, He is busy dropping gifts for adults and children so dear; Everyone is running gladly to receive the gifts while singing, "Oh Santa, you got the whole year the spirits of the three kings."
January 3, 2014 9.10pm Fifth Place Contest: Santa Claus Judged: 1/3/14 Sponsor: Poet Debbie Guzzi Honorable Mention Contest: What's Up With Santa Judged: 12/18/2014 Sponsor: Poet Jerry T. Curtis

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Date: 2/22/2015 5:40:00 PM
Hello Lovely Leonora, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/22/2015 4:52:00 PM
Leonora, Sorry, it took this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE
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Date: 12/11/2014 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this adorable poem Leonora
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Date: 12/9/2014 6:59:00 PM
what a delightful write - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2014 3:09:00 PM
Hope you are well Leonora, :)
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:38:00 PM
LEONORA , :) Congrats, in the "Santa Claus" contest! Sweet winning poem. laterz ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/5/2014 7:16:00 PM
this is adorable. You were not in time for the contest? I just know it would have placed!!! And the last part was really cool how you compared Santa to the three wise men. Hope you have the best year ever, Leonora.
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Date: 1/4/2014 12:45:00 PM
Leonora ah the perils of modern day life, I like it….David
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Date: 1/4/2014 7:26:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend David. Big hugs!
Date: 1/4/2014 9:19:00 AM
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Date: 1/4/2014 7:25:00 PM
Nice to see you here my dear friend Gigno. Big hugs!
Date: 1/4/2014 7:15:00 AM
- Santa Claus, contest - sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi is drawn and Christmas is over - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, LEONORA ! - Now Santa Claus needs to take a well-deserved vacation :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2014 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend Anne Lise. Big hugs!
Date: 1/4/2014 5:35:00 AM
Hiya poppet, congratulations xx
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Date: 1/4/2014 7:23:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend Mandy. Big hugs!
Date: 1/4/2014 1:06:00 AM
Hello my lovely sis and Bff.. Leo, I like this witty story, making time for all the loving world. Leave it to Santa, and his brilliant ideas... Thank you for the phone call my dear loving sis... It's always nice hearing from you... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2014 1:42:00 AM
Thank u so much my dearest sis. Hugs, hugs! I always wish the best & all the happiness for you my dearest sis & Bff. I don't want you to be sad/hurt. We all love & care so much for you here .
Date: 1/3/2014 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Leonora. A great take on the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/4/2014 1:44:00 AM
thank u my dear friend, Joyce. Big hugs!
Date: 1/3/2014 9:22:00 PM
What a fabulous and glorious write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening! What a harmonious Santa inspired piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/4/2014 2:11:00 AM
Thank you, thank u so much again my very dear friend, Russell.
Date: 1/3/2014 7:57:00 PM
You have quite the imagination my dear. I'm glad he still got the gifts out. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/4/2014 2:12:00 AM
thank u so much my dear friend Richard.
Date: 1/3/2014 5:50:00 PM
So cute Lenora, it would be a nice children's book! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/4/2014 2:13:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement and especially for enjoying my poem my dear friend Debbie. Hugs!
Date: 1/3/2014 2:28:00 PM
ohhh, lorie.. you bring on the true spirit of st. nick jingling bells of joy!.. i should have called you when you where here, is that right?.. sayang; your pasalubongs are still with me... thank you for enjoying my poem for your contest.. now i miss you more... huggs!
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Date: 1/4/2014 2:16:00 AM
thank u so much my very dear friend Nette. I did not go back home to the Phil my dear friend. I just stayed here during our short holidays. Wow! I've pasalubong? TY! Hugs, hugs! I've also for you from my previous trips & from here. Naipon na nga ;)))
Date: 1/3/2014 9:05:00 AM
Enjoyed this light hearted piece... Santa could use a snow making machine to keep his helper in good health :)
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Date: 1/4/2014 2:17:00 AM
Thank you my dear new friend Rex.
Date: 1/3/2014 8:25:00 AM
- Poor Santa Claus ..... a poem with enjoyable fantasy Leonora :)) - I already have an appointment to the doctor for Santa ..... we need to get a specialist to fix Santa to the next Christmas - December is not always snow and frost in Norway ... .. he can not use a snowman .... it will melt .... - Good luck in the the contest! - Wish you a nice weekend, my friend Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2014 8:56:00 AM
:))))))) you're right my dear friend Anne Lise. Snowman will melt in warm places lol. Thank you so much. Big hugs!

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