Sankofa In Safranbolu

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Kai Michael Neumann.


Sankofa is a legend of Ghana and Mustafa is a legend in Safranbolu.

‘Sankofa’ In 'Safranbolu'

This bird from Ghana’s legends flies forward looking backward
                      In the Twi language twinned with indigenous souls and wisdom
the feathered friend suggests to go back and get it and I suppose
                     some fly backwards while looking ahead but then life is not only
Chronos but 'Kairos' with the meter entwined and composed

At this precise moment not alone in this moving instant it waves
                     and oscillates conjoining what was and will be when the present
is the past in a flash and one cannot step into the same river again
              yet the future is shaped by the past the here and now a 'Kairometer'
transcending artefacts and boundaries into ‘truths’ and reality
	
The bird flies and time flows back and beyond near and far
                                            further on wings and pinions with roots at heart

In ‘Safranbolu’ the ancient Ottoman town on the Black Sea Coast
                              and thus close to Ghana in real time place and connection
the old man had been tending the clock in the tower both man and
                                   the turret free standing and wise still present and one
‘Seventy years’ as he explained pendulum hands and the wheels

What memories pride mechanics precision preserved aspiration and
                   dignity flying into the face of the clock and the distortions of time

Mustafa had climbed those steps so often had rung the bell
                             oiled the time keeper had not forgotten a day of his duties
had become one with the time piece and stood still many times
                                 in awe of monument and pacing the sleepy old town yet
he flew forward so peacefully looking back in retrospect and respect

He has watched birds history duration impermanence imprinting the
                   meaning of a life worthy of living in honour of what is the present

20th November in all past and future revisited

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/30/2016 3:37:00 PM
This is like being in a film like The Matrix Kai. Suspended animation of time and place. I would love to witness your Kairometer. Amazingly different poem.
Login to Reply
Neumann Avatar
Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/1/2016 1:35:00 AM
Thank you Jean. Your appreciation is a good start to my day...
Date: 11/25/2016 7:53:00 AM
Your style is so unique, Kai:) congratulations on this lovely win:)
Login to Reply
Neumann Avatar
Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/26/2016 12:18:00 AM
Thank you Jo. I much appreciate that.
Date: 11/24/2016 11:58:00 PM
Wonderful Kai, wonderful... I love the tale and how it stretches over wide distances both in time and in geography. Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Neumann Avatar
Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/25/2016 1:28:00 AM
Thank you Darren. It is morning for me here and time moves on, still and silent. many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/24/2016 10:48:00 PM
This is truly a class apart. Amazing writing. Congratulations, Kai!
Login to Reply
Neumann Avatar
Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/25/2016 1:29:00 AM
Thank you Tamal. In real time, I am just waking up with my coffee, but the old man in Safronbolu is there already. Wishes to you, Kai
Date: 11/24/2016 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations Kai on the first placement of the contest.
Login to Reply
Neumann Avatar
Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/25/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Nadya. i so much appreciate that.What a start to my day. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/23/2016 1:22:00 AM
This is an astounding piece of work.where do you find it.? Its like being suspended in another era. Me thinks you put a lot of work in here. It commands respect and I hope it gets well received by the other Soupers. "Hey you lot come read this one!!!!"
Login to Reply
Neumann Avatar
Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/23/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thank you Jannie. To answer your your question, I have no idea, but I know that my South African wife is a real inspiration...Many wishes, Kai
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter