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Sankofa is a legend of Ghana and Mustafa is a legend in Safranbolu.

Sankofa In Safranbolu

‘Sankofa’ In 'Safranbolu'

This bird from Ghana’s legends flies forward looking backward
                      In the Twi language twinned with indigenous souls and wisdom
the feathered friend suggests to go back and get it and I suppose
                     some fly backwards while looking ahead but then life is not only
Chronos but 'Kairos' with the meter entwined and composed

At this precise moment not alone in this moving instant it waves
                     and oscillates conjoining what was and will be when the present
is the past in a flash and one cannot step into the same river again
              yet the future is shaped by the past the here and now a 'Kairometer'
transcending artefacts and boundaries into ‘truths’ and reality
	
The bird flies and time flows back and beyond near and far
                                            further on wings and pinions with roots at heart

In ‘Safranbolu’ the ancient Ottoman town on the Black Sea Coast
                              and thus close to Ghana in real time place and connection
the old man had been tending the clock in the tower both man and
                                   the turret free standing and wise still present and one
‘Seventy years’ as he explained pendulum hands and the wheels

What memories pride mechanics precision preserved aspiration and
                   dignity flying into the face of the clock and the distortions of time

Mustafa had climbed those steps so often had rung the bell
                             oiled the time keeper had not forgotten a day of his duties
had become one with the time piece and stood still many times
                                 in awe of monument and pacing the sleepy old town yet
he flew forward so peacefully looking back in retrospect and respect

He has watched birds history duration impermanence imprinting the
                   meaning of a life worthy of living in honour of what is the present

20th November in all past and future revisited
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Murray Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 3:37 PM
This is like being in a film like The Matrix Kai. Suspended animation of time and place. I would love to witness your Kairometer. Amazingly different poem.
Neumann Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 1:35 AM
Thank you Jean. Your appreciation is a good start to my day...
Daniel Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Your style is so unique, Kai:) congratulations on this lovely win:)
Neumann Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Thank you Jo. I much appreciate that.
White Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 11:58 PM
Wonderful Kai, wonderful... I love the tale and how it stretches over wide distances both in time and in geography. Congratulations!
Neumann Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 1:28 AM
Thank you Darren. It is morning for me here and time moves on, still and silent. many wishes, Kai
Kundu Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 10:48 PM
This is truly a class apart. Amazing writing. Congratulations, Kai!
Neumann Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Thank you Tamal. In real time, I am just waking up with my coffee, but the old man in Safronbolu is there already. Wishes to you, Kai
Negron Flores Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations Kai on the first placement of the contest.
Neumann Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Thank you Nadya. i so much appreciate that.What a start to my day. Many wishes, Kai
Breedt Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 1:22 AM
This is an astounding piece of work.where do you find it.? Its like being suspended in another era. Me thinks you put a lot of work in here. It commands respect and I hope it gets well received by the other Soupers. "Hey you lot come read this one!!!!"
Neumann Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Jannie. To answer your your question, I have no idea, but I know that my South African wife is a real inspiration...Many wishes, Kai
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