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Sanity

Exploding emotions, raw wounds bleed for injustice sake, cause and effect to no end of intelligence. Rambling words circle the cranial cavity blocking the attack of firey arrows. Is the defense enough to keep the sanity? Time will tell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/28/2010 5:30:00 AM
Love this write Doris - Raw and deep - Love it - Thanks for sharing this write Doris - It was a joy to read -:)
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Date: 3/26/2010 10:30:00 AM
Great write Doris thy ay there is a thin line between genius and insanity, thanks for your support DANIEL
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Date: 3/26/2010 10:27:00 AM
Glad to hear that, Doris! Stay out of the line of fire and duck if you see arrows coming your way. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/26/2010 10:06:00 AM
You WILL keep your sanity, Doris. Just put one foot in front of the other and keep going. Very powerful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/26/2010 9:36:00 AM
Explosive poetry here Doris... Wonderful.....:JP]
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Date: 3/26/2010 8:35:00 AM
Thanks for posting it so real.
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