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Sangria Sunset

Kaleidoscope of a rainbow's hope, realizations of grandiosity from a splendorous mount- A looking glass for a peace, alas, crystallization of beauty from an azure fount. Sunset hues of yellow and white, with a splash of Prussian in rain's delight- Contrasts of the day and night with a flash of a lover's fantasy sight. Spectrum dreams, not as it seems, continuous light shines with fervor's gleam- A rift of a cliff of a twilit stream, clashes with reverie’s majestic supreme. I've seen the beauty held in a rainbow's desire, as the rain ends with sangria fire- Releasing all the glow acquired with the flow, glistened tints of pink sapphire. Palatial sprays in canary ways are believed to shower life with nectar, my medallion stays on my porch these days, and receive nourishment from a butterfly collector. Chartreuse and cobalt with a splash of honeyed hazel shimmer, brings abstruse beauty with a flash of lovely palatial glimmer. Date Written: February 13, 2017

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Date: 1/18/2018 1:31:00 PM
Such an amazing way you have with words and just over-the-top imagery. A very beautiful write Luloo. Congratulations on your win! ~Judy
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Date: 1/16/2018 5:18:00 PM
such stunning imagery Luloo and the pic was awesome!!! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2018 9:53:00 PM
Knocked it out of the park with your imagery. Congrats on your win, Laura.
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Date: 1/10/2018 9:22:00 AM
thank you sweet Line ;)- luloo
Date: 1/8/2018 10:54:00 PM
Beautiful imagery , Laura,congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/9/2018 12:06:00 PM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo
Date: 1/8/2018 11:26:00 AM
SKAT made an excellent choice. Congrats!
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Date: 1/8/2018 12:43:00 PM
thank you dear Richard :) -luloo
Date: 1/8/2018 10:04:00 AM
Nice win, Laura. SKAT
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:44:00 AM
thank you very much SKAT! :)-luloo
Date: 5/7/2017 2:30:00 PM
This poem is like descriptive harmony, congratulations
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:44:00 AM
thank you dear Brian :) -luloo
Date: 4/12/2017 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this great imagery Laura! :-)
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:44:00 AM
many thanks Martin : )-luloo
Date: 3/18/2017 7:58:00 AM
Such a colourful piece luloo and the internal rhyme adds depth. Congrats!
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:44:00 AM
thank you :) -luloo
Date: 3/16/2017 12:24:00 PM
Beautiful, creative imagery! Masterfully written, Laura! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/16/2017 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on this beauty, Luloo!!
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Date: 3/16/2017 10:48:00 AM
thank you Kim! :)-luloo
Date: 3/16/2017 8:43:00 AM
You know I love this poem, you are peaking I think right up there with the best on this site, congrats on a fine shared 2nd place.
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Date: 3/16/2017 10:48:00 AM
thank you so much dear John, I am honored for the 2nd placement in your rhyming contest :) Be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 3/15/2017 10:55:00 PM
Both my mom and sis are well-known artists in my area, and I have to share this with them - I know they will feel the same as I!
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Date: 3/16/2017 10:47:00 AM
thank you once again! I am so grateful for the honor of 2nd place- be blessed :) -luloo
Date: 3/15/2017 10:53:00 PM
A superb and lyrical painting of words, with a masterful application of a broad palette of verbal colors! The photo is very appropriate, as this wonderful piece paints a very similar image in the mind ... love everything about this, Laura - congrats!! :-)
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Date: 3/16/2017 10:47:00 AM
wow! thank you so much Greg, you just made my day :) -luloo
Date: 2/17/2017 12:27:00 PM
Wonderful writing, you get me every time with the internal rhyme, congrats on a high placement.
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Date: 2/17/2017 10:57:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats!!
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Date: 1/8/2018 12:46:00 PM
thank you sweet Sushma :)-luloo
Date: 2/16/2017 3:03:00 AM
This is so much more beyond beautiful, Luloo:) a fave and a 7:)
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Date: 1/8/2018 12:45:00 PM
thank you sweet Jo :)-luloo
Date: 2/14/2017 5:28:00 AM
Loved it... Beautiful imagery... A big 7...
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Date: 1/8/2018 12:45:00 PM
thank you sweet Supraja ;)-luloo
Date: 2/13/2017 9:11:00 PM
Beautiful LuLoo, such depth of color...
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/8/2018 12:45:00 PM
many thanks dear Charlie : )-luloo
Date: 2/13/2017 6:56:00 PM
astounding
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/8/2018 12:45:00 PM
thank you Donna :) -luloo
Date: 2/13/2017 6:01:00 PM
wow, so much beauty in this one!! I just love the pink sapphire image! And many others. Thanks so much for my win with Loveliness!!
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Date: 1/8/2018 12:44:00 PM
thank you sweet Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 2/13/2017 3:25:00 PM
This is definitely a perfect poem for the beautiful contest because it is so incredibly...beautiful. Love that title too, I wish I had thought of that. Really nice Laura, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/8/2018 12:44:00 PM
many thanks dear Chris :)-luloo
Date: 2/13/2017 1:04:00 PM
Nice write. It did bring me pleasure. Enjoy the imagery and rhythm.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/8/2018 12:44:00 PM
thank you Frank :)-luloo

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