Sandy Shore

We met along the sandy shore your sparkling blue I did adore that dreamy look I didn't doubt waves rushing in then rushing out   I wonder what life had in store we met along the sandy shore secrets shared under stars of bright a gleaming hope throughout the night   The sun arose before we knew you kissing me, I kissing you we met along the sandy shore secluded spots we both explore   Holding close as desire craves we're overcome by crashing waves romantic scenes one can't ignore we met along the sandy shore

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Date: 7/15/2018 5:06:00 PM
A sandy shore sounds fine..A lovely place to watch the sunset and share an ice-cream.How lovely and romantic...your poem is.
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Date: 7/11/2018 3:12:00 PM
Oh. My. Gosh! Favorite! Love this
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Date: 7/11/2018 12:04:00 AM
A fabulous romantic tale, Tim!
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Date: 7/10/2018 10:18:00 PM
Love colliding ever so sweetly along the shore. This is so dreamy and romantic. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/10/2018 6:45:00 PM
we met along a sandy shore, and quatern form I do adore!!! Lovely!
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Date: 7/10/2018 2:13:00 PM
- Love it, Tim ... a beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/10/2018 12:48:00 PM
This is truly a "beautiful" poem. Perfectly written, Tim.
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Date: 7/10/2018 11:11:00 AM
Ahh, such a beautiful and lovely poem this is,each and every line of it was beautiful, and I really enjoyed reading it, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/10/2018 9:02:00 AM
This is nice...refreshing breeze blows gently through this one...All the best Tim
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Date: 7/10/2018 8:11:00 AM
Quatrains are not easy to write and follow a cohesive train of thought. I don't recall seeing one from you before this one. You did a great job of making the reader feel your emotions.
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Date: 7/10/2018 7:55:00 AM
exactly what Jan said. the repetition made such an impact. I like ;)
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Date: 7/10/2018 7:50:00 AM
OOH beautiful and passionate Tim:-) love the impact of the repeated lines:-) hugs Jan xx
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