Sands In My Hand

trickled with my teardrops

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/4/2023 6:37:00 PM

Dear Jcb, your minimal poem is so maximal in its vivid poignant effect. Potent brilliant brevity spills from your pained, passionate pen. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2023 7:38:00 PM

wow, so short and bittersweet. Was this for a contest of Brian? Congrats

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/25/2023 1:23:00 AM

This is really wonderful (it should have placed higher) Congratulations for your win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/24/2023 10:06:00 AM

Great imagery! Congratulations!

Valsa George

Date: 7/24/2023 5:20:00 AM

You have caught the mood of melancholy perfectly. Apt comparison. Congratulations Jez on your win.

Len Gasun

Date: 7/24/2023 3:47:00 AM

Brilliant and awesome description of the title my dear poet friend. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings always. Hugs

Di11y Da11y

Date: 7/24/2023 1:22:00 AM

Beautiful and poignant scene conjured, congratulations on your placement

Jcb Brul
Date: 7/24/2023 9:03:00 PM

Thank you Di11y Da11y, your contest theme is really inspiring!