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Sands In My Hand

trickled with my teardrops

Copyright © JC Brul | Year Posted 2023

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December 4, 2023 at 6:37 PM

Dear Jcb, your minimal poem is so maximal in its vivid poignant effect. Potent brilliant brevity spills from your pained, passionate pen. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

July 25, 2023 at 7:38 PM

wow, so short and bittersweet. Was this for a contest of Brian? Congrats

July 25, 2023 at 1:23 AM

This is really wonderful (it should have placed higher) Congratulations for your win.

July 24, 2023 at 10:06 AM

Great imagery! Congratulations!

July 24, 2023 at 5:20 AM

You have caught the mood of melancholy perfectly. Apt comparison. Congratulations Jez on your win.

July 24, 2023 at 3:47 AM

Brilliant and awesome description of the title my dear poet friend. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings always. Hugs

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