Sandpiper

I watch them on the beach - shorebirds they are called running here and there. Residents of land more than the air, they'd rather poke their beaks into the sand probing for morsels of tasty crustaceans. Pecking, always pecking, scrambling to and fro, they're focused, ever focused on the job at hand. Not especially strong, graceful, colorful, or pretty, they are, however, speedy. They scuttle easily through low tides, rushing for the shore on skinny legs when waves come crashing. These industrious little creatures seem unconcerned with the loftiness of clouds. Yet at times, they will gather as one body in the sky, performing an amazing aerial show. Run, sandpiper, run. Soon your eggs will hatch. In your being grounded you reap rewards. Written by Andrea Dietrich on 9/17/13 for nette onclaud's BUILD YOUR OWN SAND!Poetry Contest
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Duncan Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 10:32 PM
cute one Andrea,,,, I wrote one 1975 ? called Seagulls, not posted though ;} see you later alligator <3
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 9:15 AM
How I love poems about animals. I loved the visual of them scurry out at low tide to hunt for little creatures then scurry back toward shore as the tide and waves come rushing in. Wonderful write Andrea.
Babcock Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 6:30 PM
You know how I love watching nature so on this poem I felt I was sitting watching the birds on the beach. love phyl
Ponce Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 9:39 AM
When I was nearing the end, I could almost feel walls closing in on me and it was like I was being chased! Incredible!
Courtney Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 12:11 AM
very good creative
Harper Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 10:34 PM
Andrea, yes, American, lol, but spelling and grammar although important aren't as important as the heart of the poem, this one is fun, enjoyed reading it.
Bayles Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 2:27 PM
I like this poem.
Cousins Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 5:50 PM
love it
Koven Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Andrea, this was a impressive description of Sandpipers, an enjoyable read. Allan
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September 22, 2013 at 8:12 PM
good winning poem...PD
Carter Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:01 PM
Very cool. Loved the "Run, sandpiper, run"
Horne Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 3:23 PM
wonderfully descriptive write - hope it will be a big winner, my friend
Sirak Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 8:15 AM
Fantastic poem. You painted a nice scene with your words. Can almost see them.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:49 AM
BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING DRAWING A BEAUTY OF A PICTURE
Jones Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 12:09 PM
Described beautifully Andrea ...congratulations on your win...
Jones Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man! If I still ate meat, I think I'd turn into a sandpiper. Those crustaceans sound delicious!
Roberts Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 10:21 AM
lovely birds, lovely poem ....Seren
Horsman Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 10:17 AM
Oh this is a winner, i'll check this Andrea, congrats Andrea,, it is really excellent poetry,
May Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:49 AM
wonderful write Andrea...congrats on your win
Adams Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:25 AM
as I said before, you did a great job with the sandpiper...beautifully crafted, congrats on your win :) hugs
Richards Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:19 AM
Love your winning poem Andrea........I wish I were sitting on the shore, watching these fascinating creatures scuttle through the low tides!! But you took me there for awhile......thanks for that!! :) Congrats!!
Gasun Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:01 AM
So happy to read this very beautiful and superb poem of yours my very dear friend Andrea. Many hearty congratulations on your great win. Cheers and biggest hugs to you! thank you so much again for sharing and for everything. love lots always, Leonora
Hamilton Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 8:35 AM
stunning imagery Andrea well done and congrats on win Shadow x smile
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September 20, 2013 at 7:32 AM
I love walking and chasing the little birds and watching them run on those scrawny little legs. Congratulations on your win.
Neels Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 6:35 AM
I knew this one would be a winner, congratulations Andrea with this beauty :)
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