Sandcastles

We can’t defeat the clock,
despite our best intent.
No buffer to the shock,
no reason to lament.

Don’t be sad, don’t be scared,
you can’t abandon hope.
Think of all that we’ve shared,
you’ll find a way to cope.

This gift is only lent
and certain rules apply.
Enjoy what we’ve been sent,
don’t watch the world go by.

Standing firm, standing tall,
against the ebb and flow.
Time’s tide will take us all;
our hopes and dreams laid low.

These thoughts we can’t eschew,
for we have reached the edge.
Now I have to leave you,
no matter what I pledge.

This fate there’s no cheating,
my finis, close at hand.
We are each just fleeting;
a castle made of sand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/10/2017 5:39:00 PM
Hi John: You epitomized the truth that we should make each day count with or without family and you expressed it beautifully. It's okay to write a poem now and then. Great write!
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John Michaels
Date: 8/13/2017 4:07:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Ralph. Am glad you liked it! Regards, John.
Date: 8/5/2017 12:03:00 AM
A simple yet beautiful poem that tells of the importance of relishing time spent with loved ones:) great writing, John:)
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John Michaels
Date: 8/5/2017 10:33:00 AM
Thanks for the great comments, Jo. I elected to use a "simple" approach (avoiding my usual 'need a thesaurus to translate' it) to reach as many people as possible. It seems to be striking a chord, based on the comments I've received, so hopefully that has worked! All the best, John.
Date: 8/1/2017 5:32:00 PM
oh yes, it is so very fleeting and to see those we have loved for years passing away is such a strange feeling. We have to hang on to the hope that we shall see them all again. I LOVE this one, John.
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John Michaels
Date: 8/2/2017 1:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. It's very sad but an unfortunate part of our existence; to eventually lose those we love. We just have to make the most of the time we have with them, whilst we can. Kind regards, John.
Date: 8/1/2017 2:12:00 PM
Time is so fleeting....I really feel this as my husband and I deal with health issues as we grow older. The time went by so fast. Your poem is beautiful John! Congratulations on your HM. : )
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John Michaels
Date: 8/1/2017 2:38:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie. Your kind comments are much appreciated. Regards, John.
Date: 7/28/2017 11:57:00 AM
My husband's cancer has made me really appreciate the fragility of our lives and I cherish each day i have. I love the sandcastles stanza especially John:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2017 3:03:00 PM
If it hadn't been for his cancer I would never have written my first poem 'Splendid Isolation' which was written whilst he was actually undergoing the surgery. He is cued and I have a hobby i love and its helped me through the trauma of life issues in the last 3 years:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Michaels
Date: 7/29/2017 4:46:00 AM
I'm so sorry to hear that, Jan. This poem was inspired by personal loss in my own family, imagining how they might have viewed the world in their last days. Thanks for your supportive comments. Regards, John.
Date: 7/28/2017 10:21:00 AM
A lovely and meaningful metaphor, John. The waves of time eat away at our life; we have to make good use of the years allotted to us...before the final calling! Regards // paul
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John Michaels
Date: 7/29/2017 4:50:00 AM
Thank you for your supportive comments, Paul. You're so right - who knows when that final tide will come to sweep us away. All the best, John.
Date: 7/28/2017 8:11:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, John. I try to appreciate each day before the tide takes mine.
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John Michaels
Date: 7/28/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thanks for the kind comments, Mike. Sage words to live by!! Kind regards, John.
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