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Sandcastles

'twas a work of art,
but the prince watched it disappear 
into waves of blue~
the end of dreams it broke his heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:25 PM
Your "Sandcastles" is a fun write. I love your Great/Fun/Pretty Picture. The beach is a fun place. "Good Luck" I also did SANDCASTLES. I love the beach. Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Sharma Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:47 PM
It is sad to see the creation go way like this. All the best for the contest.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:22 PM
oh, sad but well written for the contest. Liked it!
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