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Sandcastle Symbol

Devotion now firm

Cemented by loving hearts --

   Summertime symbol



Entry for the Sandcastle Haiku contest

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Date: 1/10/2011 6:22:00 PM

The title really intrigued me--an asset for any poem. Congratulations on your contest win! Wishing you continued success with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

De R

Date: 12/9/2010 10:08:00 AM

Sandcastles are truly a symbol of summer. Loved your second line!Congrats on your win!:) Hugs, Emilia

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/8/2010 6:12:00 PM

congrats! Diane! jimbo

Daver Austin

Date: 12/8/2010 2:07:00 PM

This one hits the spot right about now. the temp here this morning - 23 degrees, wind chill down around 10. I'm going to that beach and look at the sand castle. Love, Dave

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2010 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! I like the upbeat quality of this haiku. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 12/7/2010 12:08:00 PM

Many congratulations Diane on your win in Skat's contest with this little gem >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Diane in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:50:00 PM

Sweet one, Diane. Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 5:20:00 PM

Congrats Diane on winning the 4th place-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:28:00 PM

Congrats Diane on your sweet success in Irma's contest with this wonderful entry my friend.. enjoy another big win with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations Diane on your 4th place, Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:26:00 AM

Congrats on your win in skats contest... well done Diane...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:11:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Diane

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/5/2010 11:25:00 PM

love this theme, Diane, congrats to you with this winner. Harry

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:28:00 PM

Diane~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2010 1:17:00 PM

Fervent lines Diane in this Haiku .. good luck int he current contest.. special message in your lines.. enjoyed with luv.. my entry is "Love Castles in the Sand"...happy weekend...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/4/2010 12:03:00 PM

Well done Diane....best of luck with this gem...and BTW I only know of the Beatles from radio and TV... I was 2 when Srgt Pepper came out..lol glad you enjoyed the write on Lennon...