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Sandcastle Symbol

Devotion now firm

Cemented by loving hearts --

   Summertime symbol



Entry for the Sandcastle Haiku contest

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January 10, 2011 at 6:22 PM

The title really intrigued me--an asset for any poem. Congratulations on your contest win! Wishing you continued success with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

De R

December 9, 2010 at 10:08 AM

Sandcastles are truly a symbol of summer. Loved your second line!Congrats on your win!:) Hugs, Emilia

James Marshall Goff

December 8, 2010 at 6:12 PM

congrats! Diane! jimbo

Daver Austin

December 8, 2010 at 2:07 PM

This one hits the spot right about now. the temp here this morning - 23 degrees, wind chill down around 10. I'm going to that beach and look at the sand castle. Love, Dave

Sara Kendrick

December 7, 2010 at 3:09 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

December 7, 2010 at 12:19 PM

Congratulations on your win! I like the upbeat quality of this haiku. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

December 7, 2010 at 12:08 PM

Many congratulations Diane on your win in Skat's contest with this little gem >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 7, 2010 at 5:42 AM

Congratulations on your win Diane in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2010 at 9:50 PM

Sweet one, Diane. Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet

December 6, 2010 at 5:20 PM

Congrats Diane on winning the 4th place-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 6, 2010 at 3:28 PM

Congrats Diane on your sweet success in Irma's contest with this wonderful entry my friend.. enjoy another big win with luv..

John Freeman

December 6, 2010 at 8:15 AM

Congratulations Diane on your 4th place, Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

December 6, 2010 at 4:26 AM

Congrats on your win in skats contest... well done Diane...

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 6, 2010 at 2:11 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Diane

Harry Horsman

December 5, 2010 at 11:25 PM

love this theme, Diane, congrats to you with this winner. Harry

Skat A

December 5, 2010 at 9:28 PM

Diane~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 4, 2010 at 1:17 PM

Fervent lines Diane in this Haiku .. good luck int he current contest.. special message in your lines.. enjoyed with luv.. my entry is "Love Castles in the Sand"...happy weekend...

Michael J. Falotico

December 4, 2010 at 12:03 PM

Well done Diane....best of luck with this gem...and BTW I only know of the Beatles from radio and TV... I was 2 when Srgt Pepper came out..lol glad you enjoyed the write on Lennon...