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Sandcastle

tide out castle built tide in labour washed away--- just like life really. © Harry J Horsman 2010

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2012 9:12:00 PM

harry, I see you entered t his in two different contests and won both times. Because it's THAT good. Belated congrats to you in gail's contest. Mine didn't go thru at all in that contest. hahaha. It was called Dirty Art!

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/18/2012 6:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win 'arry!! big hugs, love ya deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2012 4:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Gail's "Sandcastles" contest Harry. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/18/2012 11:06:00 AM

Congratulations Harry xx

David Williams

Date: 5/18/2012 10:31:00 AM

Harry congrats on your win..David

Sarah Hales

Date: 12/8/2010 2:24:00 AM

loved this ...glad you read my poem and enjoyed sarah x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Harry in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:46:00 PM

VERY good, Harry. Love the anology to life. Congrats. Luv ,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:23:00 PM

Congrats Harry on your big win in Irma's contest with this super entry my friend.. a rare beauty luv.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem with luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 10:30:00 AM

Congrats Harry on winning the 3rd place-kashinath

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/6/2010 9:48:00 AM

Hi. Congrats for the win with the lovely and well written piece above. Thanks for your kind comment. Eamon

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/6/2010 9:22:00 AM

great to see your placement Harry, & good wishes for the future

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:09:00 AM

Congratulations Harry on your 3ard place win. Agaape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:08:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, harry,

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:25:00 PM

Hello, Harry~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/5/2010 8:30:00 PM

Knew this would be in the winner's list. Many congratulations Harry.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2010 8:36:00 AM

Good one..Yes, there are similarites..Sara..Good luck in contest..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2010 6:47:00 AM

Indeed, the "tide" of time washes away the fruits of our labor, Harry. An insightful and meaningful entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/4/2010 3:35:00 AM

Very nice comparison of the sandcastle with just like life, harry

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/4/2010 1:23:00 AM

I so agree with you. All the best for the contest.