Sandbox

In single file with rifles in their hands
belaboured breath under an airless sun,
slip sliding swiftly, softly shifting sand
beneath their boots the sparkling granules run.
When they set out, those twenty-two brave men
all battle hardened, making this Platoon
were slowly picked off, time and time again
by next door's dog, or buried with a spoon.
And just when safety seemed to be in sight,
gazing skyward, the Captain cursed their luck,
they backed off from it's shadow, wreathed in fright,
their doom sealed by a bright pink rubber duck.

A child's imagination knows no bounds
for in their world, enjoyment's always found.


For contest 'Sandbox', sponsor Anthony Slausen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 14, 2016 at 3:07 AM
I smiled.. This vivid image will stick in my mind for quite a while :) Good luck in the contest!
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October 14, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel. Regards, Viv
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October 12, 2016 at 9:31 PM
I had to read this a couple times! Great write, very creative Viv!
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October 14, 2016 at 10:59 PM
Thanks, Arthur. Regards, Viv
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October 12, 2016 at 12:12 PM
I enjoyed your creative imagination, Viv! I can relate to the content of this sonnet which takes me back many years! gl in the contest. Regards // paul
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October 12, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Thanks, Paul, if I had a pound for every toy soldier I lost in our yard, I'd be rather well off. Regards, Viv
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October 11, 2016 at 6:32 PM
Love this one of boys playing soldiers. Good luck in the competition, Viv: Always,bSuZ
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October 12, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Thanks, Suzy D, hope you're well, Viv x
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October 9, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Very creative, Viv - your healthy imagination shows through and shines ... CayCay
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October 12, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Thanks, CayCay, SM, Viv x
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