Sand On My Toes

Warm sand between toes

Ocean waves lapping the shore

Gentle breeze blowing

Summer evening on the beach

A touch of heaven on earth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pettit Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 9:26 PM
You are not describing time on the beach in February. I can't wait for warmer weather when I can go back to the Jersey Shore and have experiences like the one you describe so well in this entry.
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 9:33 PM
WEll, Francine, I have seen a lot of your poems tonight. This one was lovely as well. Goodnight now! LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 6:48 AM
A nice Tanka with fine images.
Devonshire Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 10:17 PM
Indeed, this beach setting does make us feel like we have found "heaven on earth." Awesome Tana, Francine! Love, Carolyn
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