Sand Dunes

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Driving through the desert vast sands of time gather, wind strewn word games and banter reacquaints from shorn years arise a stagnant dune tears fall from a grey leaden sky as bittersweet moments pass by

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 5/8/2025 12:27:00 PM

The image above complements your words. Well done, Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/8/2025 1:51:00 PM

Thanks Robert!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/7/2025 7:52:00 PM

Love the imagery expressed here as I too can relate during road trips…beautifully written!!

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/8/2025 1:41:00 PM

Ty Pace! A pleasure to meet you. I look forward to reading your poetry

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/7/2025 5:38:00 PM

Anaya...ahhh the sands of time and thinking about all sorts of things. Bittersweet sums it all up indeed as we often experience happiness and sadness together so often. Smiles (hopefully without sadness for the moment)!

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/8/2025 1:40:00 PM

Smiles, Duke! without sadness

Paige Hind

Date: 5/7/2025 1:32:00 PM

Again, a similar feel to this as your most recent one. I really liked it. I used to love to drive, take drives-

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/7/2025 3:34:00 PM

You are correct, this is an unabridged edition of roadtrip !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/7/2025 12:07:00 PM

- A universal experience that we can relate to ... great written, Anaya :) - hugs

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/7/2025 12:11:00 PM

Oh you have made my day, Anne --it's difficult to reflect at times, thank god for poetry and metaphors! xhugs