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Sand Dunes

                               Driving through the desert vast
                               sands of time gather, wind strewn                                                         
                               word games and banter reacquaints    
                               from shorn years arise a stagnant dune 
                               tears fall from a grey leaden sky
                               as bittersweet moments pass by
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Gorelick Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 12:27 PM
The image above complements your words. Well done, Anaya
Anaya Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 1:51 PM
Thanks Robert!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 7:52 PM
Love the imagery expressed here as I too can relate during road trips…beautifully written!!
Anaya Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Ty Pace! A pleasure to meet you. I look forward to reading your poetry
Beaufort Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 5:38 PM
Anaya...ahhh the sands of time and thinking about all sorts of things. Bittersweet sums it all up indeed as we often experience happiness and sadness together so often. Smiles (hopefully without sadness for the moment)!
Anaya Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 1:40 PM
Smiles, Duke! without sadness
Hind Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 1:32 PM
Again, a similar feel to this as your most recent one. I really liked it. I used to love to drive, take drives-
Anaya Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 3:34 PM
You are correct, this is an unabridged edition of roadtrip !
Andresen Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 12:07 PM
- A universal experience that we can relate to ... great written, Anaya :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Oh you have made my day, Anne --it's difficult to reflect at times, thank god for poetry and metaphors! xhugs
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