sand castle hiku

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice Z Poetry Contest 15 June 2025

^ ^ / \ ^ ~ ~ in taupe twilight calm | | | | tiny kingdom softly f a d e s ~ ~ ____ ~ tide ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ whispers a d i e u

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Valsa George

Date: 6/18/2025 5:44:00 AM

This is a real masterpiece. Love it. Both the tide and the sandcastles whisper adieu. All the Best, dear Jez.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/15/2025 11:24:00 AM

Another cute one! I'm definitely all out of ideas for these. I'll have to try another though as they are so fun when they come together x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2025 9:28:00 AM

Wonderful!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 6/14/2025 11:31:00 PM

Oh, I got to go to France and watch the tide metaphorically fade a kingdom. How cool is that, a nonviolent, awesome feeling loaded sight. Thank you so much for all of that ... CayCay