JC Brul Poet Haiku

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice Z Poetry Contest 15 June 2025

sand castle hiku

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    ^   /   \  ^    ~    ~  in taupe twilight calm
   |     |    |    |          tiny  kingdom softly    f    a    d   e   s   ~ 
   ~  ____ ~           tide ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ whispers   a
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Valsa George June 18, 2025 at 5:44 AM This is a real masterpiece. Love it. Both the tide and the sandcastles whisper adieu. All the Best, dear Jez.

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2025 at 9:28 AM Wonderful!

CayCay Godwin June 14, 2025 at 11:31 PM Oh, I got to go to France and watch the tide metaphorically fade a kingdom. How cool is that, a nonviolent, awesome feeling loaded sight. Thank you so much for all of that ... CayCay