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Sand Castle Haiku

low tide creation high tidal devastation – castle made of sand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:25:00 PM

Cogratulations on your win..Excellent last line with Spiritual meaning..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Joe in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 10:07:00 PM

Congratulations, the saying from the Bible goes thru my mind, and the first shall be last, vice versa. It's up or down at this crazy Soup, isn't it? first I see you up and then down and then up again! Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 7:42:00 PM

Congrats Joe on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:46:00 PM

Congrats Joe my friend on your top ten winning poem in Irma's contest .. a wonderful write and entry luv.. enjoy another big win tonight...

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:37:00 AM

Congratulations Joe, on your 10th place. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:38:00 AM

Congrats Joe on your success in contest...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:25:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Joe

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:44:00 PM

JOE~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/5/2010 4:33:00 PM

I can feel the rhythm of the ocean... great haiku, Joe. Good Luck in the contest!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/5/2010 3:09:00 PM

So true Joe and a great entry for the contest.. good luck my friend.. great lines to think on.. with luv..