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Sand Box Insanity

Lifting her mask she whispered "I'll show you mine .....if you show me yours" John G. Lawless 9/24/2020

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2020 12:29:00 PM

Thank you for the laugh John. I loved this clever POTD. Congratulations on having it honored. Blessings

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/28/2020 9:49:00 AM

Love, love this John.))))) Fellow poet, owned by cat. Panagiota xxxx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/27/2020 9:09:00 PM

Very funny, John! In all of this continuing chaos and division you brought us together with a laugh! Very wise! Congrats and kudos on your POTD!

John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2020 6:34:00 AM

It becomes an increasingly bizarre game of "MASK ON" - "MASK OFF".

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/27/2020 9:09:00 PM

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/27/2020 5:26:00 PM

Oh my !! Mask or no Mask, things haven't changed. Maybe she was talking about showing her smile. :) Maybe not. Soft giggle. This is cute, clever and creative. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/28/2020 11:18:00 AM

Smiling. :) Seems that way.

John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2020 6:32:00 AM

AH, Brandy, that shall forever remain a secret of the sandbox

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/27/2020 4:10:00 PM

A cute one, congratulations on POTW John!

John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2020 6:31:00 AM

thanks for stopping by Tania

John Watt

Date: 9/27/2020 2:27:00 PM

Short, pointed, and funny. Congrats on your POTW, John

John Watt
Date: 9/28/2020 10:51:00 PM

LOL!

John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2020 6:30:00 AM

...short, pointed and funny....hey....are you poking fun at me

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2020 11:58:00 AM

Sure made me smile, so nice to see a humourous potw,many congratulations john:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2020 6:28:00 AM

AH humour, that subtle feather that knocks the mind out of a rut and teases the lips into a smile.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/25/2020 6:25:00 AM

Only fair to exchange. ~~

John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2020 6:26:00 AM

I don't know Victor, those free trade agreements don't always work out...thanks for stopping by

Susan Woodrow

Date: 9/24/2020 8:24:00 PM

lol! ok, the mask bit got me in stitches...the rest just shows, the gals are way ahead so I wonder how they got behind! lol enjoyed :)

John Lawless
Date: 9/25/2020 5:40:00 AM

good question Susan. When we were kids we had a "girl" who batted in the cleanup spot and got picked for the team before most of us guys.....maybe as kids we were way ahead of the curve...((oH, Oh, not a cheap baseball play on words....}