The Grahamburglar Poet Free verse

Sand

Silky soft sand
a zen garden
dutifully raked
organized
but fluid.

Rock solid concrete
a straight sidewalk
purposefully aimed
determined
and rigid.

Silky soft sand
a seaside beach
eternally shuffled
chaotic
but natural.

Rock solid concrete
a fluted pillar
anciently built
weathered
but stoic.

Silky soft sand
a pliable mind
persistently curious
unmolded
and alive.

Rock solid concrete
a zealot view
insistently settled
decided
and dead.

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Viv Wigley May 23, 2015 at 11:45 PM Terrific, preston. And the subject fits the form beautifully. Regards, Viv The Grahamburglar May 24, 2015 at 6:59 PM Hey Viv, thanks for stopping by to read and comment. I appreciate the encouragement and kind words.

Skat A May 23, 2015 at 1:38 AM Deep poetry. Thank you for sharing. Forever *SKAT* The Grahamburglar May 23, 2015 at 6:50 PM Thanks SKAT A, I wasn't sure if I was even going to post this one, so I am glad you enjoyed it. As always, thank you for taking the time to comment. =)