Sand

Silky soft sand a zen garden dutifully raked organized but fluid. Rock solid concrete a straight sidewalk purposefully aimed determined and rigid. Silky soft sand a seaside beach eternally shuffled chaotic but natural. Rock solid concrete a fluted pillar anciently built weathered but stoic. Silky soft sand a pliable mind persistently curious unmolded and alive. Rock solid concrete a zealot view insistently settled decided and dead.

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Viv Wigley

Date: 5/23/2015 11:45:00 PM

Terrific, preston. And the subject fits the form beautifully. Regards, Viv

The Grahamburglar
Date: 5/24/2015 6:59:00 PM

Hey Viv, thanks for stopping by to read and comment. I appreciate the encouragement and kind words.

Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 1:38:00 AM

Deep poetry. Thank you for sharing. Forever *SKAT*

The Grahamburglar
Date: 5/23/2015 6:50:00 PM

Thanks SKAT A, I wasn't sure if I was even going to post this one, so I am glad you enjoyed it. As always, thank you for taking the time to comment. =)