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Sanctum

There is a place inside, Maybe deep in my heart, Where I sometimes hide, When I fall apart. Many secrets here I keep, All my feelings, too, The dreams when I sleep, And my wishes to come true. It is where I can go, When life is just to much, I let my emotions flow, And I am out of touch. I am happy in that place, Even when my heart is sad, All the troubles that I face, Suddenly don't seem so bad. In this place I can fly, Way up to the stars, The moon passes me by, And I could soar so far. It is a world of fantasy, Maybe deep in my mind, It can take away my misery, There's no better place to find. August 30th, 2013

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Date: 11/28/2023 11:28:00 PM
What a touching and seamless write this is. I absolutely love the flow and depth of emotions woven. I especially love the ending so much. Pleasure reading this on home page.
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Date: 6/10/2015 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the spot achieved here Kelly..'
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/15/2015 4:10:00 PM
Thank you for the kind congrats, Joe!
Date: 6/10/2015 12:23:00 PM
Your holy of holies is a place where nobody intrudes; there you can be safe with your thoughts and dreams. Congrats on this lovely win, Kelly. All the best...hugs // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/14/2015 12:51:00 AM
Yes, absolutely and it is a place where I can truly feel free and be myself... Thank you very much for the kind congrats and comments, Paul... Hugs :)
Date: 6/9/2015 11:52:00 AM
KELLY. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 9:24:00 AM
we all need a place we can escape to kelly - lovely descriptive write congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/11/2015 6:53:00 PM
Yes we do, especially when life becomes too hectic... Thank you Jan, for the kind congrats and comments! Hugs :)
Date: 6/9/2015 9:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win my friend. Love this image ladened write. I too want to fly..A7
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/11/2015 6:37:00 PM
Thank you for the kind congrats and comments, Robert. I'm glad you liked this older poem of mine, my friend!
Date: 6/8/2015 10:26:00 PM
That place is in a book for me! Im glad you are able to reach that place of yours Kelly. Maybe I'll see you from the moon one day :) Congrats on your win too
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/11/2015 6:19:00 PM
I do find that place in books, as well... Thank you for the kind congrats and comments. I really appreciate it, Mark!
Date: 7/18/2014 12:05:00 PM
Beautiful write. We all have that happy place we go to, we introspect deep within. Your happy place is described really well. No hate, no sorrow, no pain, and all life's nonsense out of the way. A persons mind is the one thing that is truly his, and as long as he has it, he is free.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/22/2014 5:28:00 PM
I agree, Rohan. The mind holds endless possibilities of freedom, and all we need do is use our imaginations.... Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. I really do appreciate it!
Date: 2/11/2014 8:09:00 PM
nice win Kelly, . Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/7/2014 10:01:00 AM
Kelly, .. Congratulations:) thank you for supporting my contest...... xOx ~LINDA
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/8/2014 5:51:00 PM
Hi Linda, thank you for the placement, once again! :)
Date: 12/7/2013 8:32:00 AM
Kelly What a clever and creative write. Everyone needs a place to escape when they can't deal with day to day issues anymore. Dreaming is a great way to lose yourself for a while and feel happy. Nice job Thanks for the wonderful comment on my You Flipped My World poem. Hugs
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Date: 9/23/2013 5:15:00 PM
that one just rattled my bones i relate totally excellent piece kelly
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Date: 9/5/2013 4:11:00 PM
wow! Kelly, you are right i love this. I don't know this place yet.. I have no peace in me.. No I am not dark..but, I can't seem to find the place where i can be free from it all. I like this place where all your fantasies and feelings roam away from all bad situations... excellent write...Linda
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Date: 9/3/2013 5:44:00 PM
I couldn't agree more with this. Soak in your domain and fly high. Excellent!
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Date: 8/31/2013 12:01:00 PM
HI Kelly, We all need sanctuary sometimes...Nice write.. Regards, Ken
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Date: 8/30/2013 7:22:00 PM
Impressive write Kelly. Smooth flow which I like also.
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