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"sanctuary" Redescribed

Humanity lost sound
Humans need sanctuary around
Need not cut forests
It will soon be the destined ground
For the lost love hath hatred found

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/25/2010 12:25:00 AM
Sadly, a very true message here. Too much hatred and not enough sanctuary. A paradise on earth destroyed by greed ... hatred. Very nice tanka. Smiles, Dane Ann
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