"sanctuary" Redescribed

Humanity lost sound
Humans need sanctuary around
Need not cut forests
It will soon be the destined ground
For the lost love hath hatred found
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 25, 2010 at 12:25 AM
Sadly, a very true message here. Too much hatred and not enough sanctuary. A paradise on earth destroyed by greed ... hatred. Very nice tanka. Smiles, Dane Ann
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