Samurai the Team Up

It was a steamy morning when Brick rolled out of bed,
Not sleeping well the past week or so made it worse
This whole Samurai thing was eatin at him
That's why he sent that package to his old buddy
Bill Lipton over at the 31st Park prescient

Bill was a Texan by birth, Divorced from his wife he 
decided a move as far away from her as he could get
was in order to remain sane he was a Texas Ranger
and the 31st was glad to have him, for like me he 
never gives up the hunt and Samurai was going to be just that

The 31st was the prescient that controlled 2 Parks
Prospect Park all 575 acres and McCallen with just
over 350 acres. Both had wooded areas, bike trails,
jogging trails and other activities which made them 
pleasant enough places during the day.

However at night it was another story altogether,
It seemed that the prostitution activity was picking up
and along with that so was the pimp and drug activity
Pimps are not known to be very nice to their whores
and we know the Samurai does not like that sort of thing

So I thought it time to enlist some help from my old 
friend Bill, I am confident that together we will
put the bag on mister slice and dice once and for all
at least that's the plan, I know it won't be easy because
the robed perp hides in the shadows,so that's where we look


I asked Bob Dufresne to collaborate with me on this I thought it may be fun
Let us know what you think
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/7/2010 1:05:00 PM
That Brick thinks like a detective alright....robed perp hides in the shadows..so that's where we look! Can't wait til you get your computer on line at the home 20 so we can get after that perp, Taz...
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