Samson's Bane

Samson was known for strength and flowing mane

   He loved Delilah who became his bane

      Through many a bedroom schmooze

         She found the key to his ruse

            She barbered him bald in a coup de main

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/9/2012 9:48:00 PM
Great one! Delilah sure knew his weakness! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 6/9/2012 7:57:00 PM
I'm sure having fun reading these, Robert. Good rhyme about Dalila, she was surely Samson's bane who cut his mane!
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Date: 6/9/2012 12:08:00 PM
Bob H., poor men,, why must they always give in to twisting hips..lol.. I suppose Delilah, gave all that pretty hair to the Philistines. I wonder if they made a wig of strength. This one is a great limerick,,..pd
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Date: 6/9/2012 10:01:00 AM
is that coup de mane for samson.
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Date: 6/9/2012 8:23:00 AM
Wonderfully written poetry Bob. Thank you for sharing. Have a super weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2012 5:55:00 AM
I like this Limerick very much Robert ! One of my favorite bible stories sir ! I have enjoyed reading your writes this morning dear poet, always a pleasure to do so ! Again...have a blessed one sir ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/8/2012 6:42:00 PM
This is a fantastic write my funny friend! You speak the truth in this lovely limerick! Just proof that anybody could fall in the eyes of the Lord! But he's always there to help pick us back up too! Awesome Work Bob!!
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Date: 6/8/2012 5:33:00 PM
Poor Samson, outwitted by a mere woman.
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Date: 6/8/2012 4:41:00 PM
Love it bob - you are brilliant - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/8/2012 4:37:00 PM
Great way to tell the Bible story..This story gives us proof that God is a God of second chances..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 6/8/2012 4:35:00 PM
Bob, again you bring back lifelong memories for me, there is a painting of Samson by Jerome K Jerome in my local art gallery and I have been to just stand and look and admire it literally all of my life,, the last time was two days ago,,way to go Bob...have a great weekend..David
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