Samskara

Samskara, jailer of my heart’s deepest passions
Enervating me and drowning my soul’s rapture
Karma’s imprint become love’s stealthy assassin
Lurking fiend of black depths evading capture

From my abyssal plain, a seismic accident
Atlantis resurfaces in nightmarish form
Decayed temple’s coral seaweed entanglement
Wretched thing’s agonized tentacles writhe and squirm

Fetid beast melts under gold sun’s dazzling rays
No longer, my heart ruled by this foul parasite
Spirit’s exultant victory over decay
Opened heart bounding, radiant love glowing bright

Seascape reborn, emerald flora unwinding
Into a bright mandala, my soul unbinding

6/6/16
© Thomas W. Quigley
12 syllables/line, Shakespearean Rhyme

Alternate first quatrain:

Samskara, heart fabric’s twisted bedevilment
Karmic burden, this partial soul paralysis
Kismet’s onerous imprint, my dark resident
Lurking fiend of black depths evades analysis

If you’ve a mind, let me know which you like better!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 10:05 PM
I' m an originalist 1st. Quatrain guy myself Tom. I prefer Karma rather than Kismet. Excellent write either way...
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June 7, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thank you, Charlie!
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