Sampler On the Parlor Wall

Picture on the Parlor Wall 9-27-24
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Sampler on the Parlor Wall

Shadows born from dawdling light
Stretch across a firelit room set with porcelain cups,
From tea parties long ago and faraway,
With an invitation to sample sweets and savories
Like the sampler on the parlor wall.

Beneath neat rows of alphabets stories gather,
Verses stitched with silk and dreams
And numbers that taught a woman’s craft –
A child’s wishes fly with birds and lady bugs –
Wishes to convince a suitor at the door of her wifely worth
In tidy stitches foreshadowing an orderly life.

A young lady-girl in pantaloons and blue sashes
Weaves circles of symphonic dots in French wheels
While lazy daisy chains meander on her linen fields -
Magic flares in her zigzag lines, her wishes on wooly stars.

No signature remains from her little hand -
Her hearth, her home, her heart –
Only a legacy of butterflies and roses sampled on a parlor wall
And a tiny scarlet dot of imperfection like a signature remains
Embroidered into a sampler embracing each dawn and dusk. 

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Date: 10/14/2024 12:32:00 PM
Your poem evokes a quiet, nostalgic scene that merges the physical act of embroidery with the emotional and societal expectations placed on women in the past. Through the metaphor of a sampler, the poet explores the delicate balance between creativity, domesticity, and the constraints imposed on women. The "neat rows of alphabets" and "stories gathered" represent both the learning of practical skills and the internalized lessons of a woman’s expected role in society—namely, to present herself as worthy of marriage, her worth judged by her craft.
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Date: 10/12/2024 5:27:00 AM
Hi dear Sam, the tea cups and tea parties of old create a sense of nostalgia. You are such a gifted poet and you have created a wonderful portrait of the old times when women spent most of their time in needle work and embroidery. I feel I am watching the remnants of the past displayed on the parlor wall. Loved reading your wonderful poem. Congratulations sweet friend on your well deserved win. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 10/10/2024 12:47:00 AM
A superb picture painted by your golden quill my dearest poet friend Sam! I love it and immensely enjoyed the read. Thank you so much for sharing and Congratulations on your win! Hugs... hugs.. God bless you always and your writings.
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Date: 10/4/2024 7:22:00 AM
Dear Sam! What a lovely trip down memory lane! I adore how you blend nostalgia with the warmth of tea parties and the beauty of samplers. The imagery is so vivid, it feels like I’m right there, soaking in the cozy vibes. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/15/2024 11:11:00 AM
Hi Daniel! There is something special about old samplers done by schoolgirls! It's like they leave a little piece of their dreams in every stitch! Thank you for your lovely feedback. It was wonderful to share that cozy place with you! Sending you blessings as abundant as autumn leaves.!!
Date: 10/2/2024 9:21:00 AM
tea party with porcelain cups…sweet and savory samples and a sampler… In tidy stitches foreshadowing an orderly life…love the imagery of the young girl and her craft…heartful and grievous ending. Well done, Sam! A joy to read. A fave!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/2/2024 10:09:00 AM
Hi Kim! I am so honored by your fav, your delightful feedback! Many thanks! After musing about options for the way to go with this contest I remembered the delightful historic sampler that one of my daughter-in-laws has and everything came together for this poem. I am so glad this "sampler" brought joy to your day as your feedback has brought joy to mine! Thank you so much! Sending you sweet and savory blessings!
Date: 10/1/2024 6:00:00 PM
Sam, your vividly descriptive poem captures the magic and character of a time gone by. Janice
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/2/2024 10:02:00 AM
Hi Janice! First and foremost, thank you for your lovely review and feedback. I was hoping to capture some of the flavor of an old-fashioned parlor at teatime with its porcelain cups and a sampler on the wall. Your feedback was so affirming. Sending you my gratitude and blessings!
Date: 9/29/2024 4:35:00 PM
delicately composed with outstanding wordplay on hearth and heart, Sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/29/2024 6:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette! This theme brought so many images to my mind. It was fun to look back into the age of parlors, teatime and samplers for inspiration. I thought about all of those young women honing this craft in hopes of finding a husband. Sending you many blessings and my gratitude.
Date: 9/27/2024 3:59:00 PM
This is truly magical, Sam. What a write <3
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/27/2024 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige. This is an interesting contest theme and there is something magical about treasured pictures. Sending you many blessings and my gratitude.
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