Sammy Baker Charlie 4

Sammy Baker Charlie 4, he's on my tail
like a grateful whore,
guns are blazing, cannon shells spew
it's a hell of a fight over Dien Ben Phu

and this Russian mig's amazing, they 
never seem to stall, look out the commies 
will get you, if you take a fall

and he made a pass right by my wing
and clocked me with his pilot's eyes (black)
and I quickly nodded to him back but was 
hit by a piece of flack

so I screamed to 500 miles per hour and 
turned into the sun (what fun) then he shot 
a missile past me but I got him with my gun

they tore into his cockpit and turned the inside 
red, a hand swept down the blood-stained glass
I presumed he must be dead

his chariot (his plane) spiralled to the ground on fire,
then a billowing silky flower pulled him from the
pyre: I watched the sky and clouds guide him to 
the land, then an oily red explosion lifted up the sand

 I made a low low pass, across the beachy glade at 
no more than a hundred  feet and saw the black-eyed 
devil rising to his feet

Sammy Baker Charlie 4,now I a veteran, at war no more,
and fly a Cherokee, from Tampa up to Yuma and down the Isahgee:
and when the dark clouds thunder and the rain rat-a-tat-tats
its gun,I remember the black eyed devil...oh my we had such fun!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 1/23/2015 9:16:00 AM
You have some great moments in this piece, all the components for a good poem are here and you have masterly woven them together. Emile. #7
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