Same Scene, Different Seen

Light
Snowfall
Over night
And suddenly
My view turns from postcard to Christmas card
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Lokken Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 10:49 AM
Very clever, unique feel to this.....like a parodox, almost. Best wishes, Sara:)
Gass Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 6:10 AM
What a pretty picture (or sould I say "scene?) Great title. I'm glad you liked my Haiku. I never wrote any before I joined this wonderful site. I am learning so much from so many talented writers. Thank you for sharing. Love, Robin
White Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 2:53 PM
RATS! Ummm, dude, the check's in the mail...
White Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 2:20 PM
Loved your poem; wish I could write with such expressive simplicity. Ah, but my envy overtakes me...as I imagine your view as compared to mine, and let me tell you, brother, east Texas sure ain't no pretty postcard. Sigh.
Winter Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 11:51 AM
Merry Christmas early! You paint a lovely scene. Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 10:03 AM
Love the title Nigel. Love the form of this write. The poem reads very light and warm. Great job as usual. Chris.
Jordan Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 8:28 AM
Nigel loved the play on words very ingenious - God Bless, MJ
Strand Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 8:00 AM
Like the play on words in the title Nigel.Rgds Bian & thanks for your welcome coments
Payne Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 7:25 AM
This was cute I really liked it, I love snow and christmas, wonderful tome of the year :) Blessings, ~Michaela~
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