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The mistakes i have made, The people left dismayed. This person is not me, So why can't they see. The heart & emotion, The fire, the devotion. Within you, am i, In i, you reside. Never to be apart, Together from the start. All of us the same, United without shame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/16/2016 11:26:00 AM
Carrie,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:01:00 PM
I liked this poem it feels how i've felt at one time or another
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Date: 1/5/2011 7:33:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight ... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:38:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Carrie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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