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Salvation Blues

Salvation Blues
You don't miss your papa 
Until he is slamming the gate 
You don't weep for your mama 
Until she lying in the grave 
You don't stop drinking whiskey 
Until the funds have all gone 
You don't pray to Jesus 
Until there's something to be won 
You don't laugh 
Until you fall on to your face 

And all of God's children 
Carry a sack of chains 

You don't sing, 
Until your full to the brim 
You don't feel free 
Until your tied to a chair 
In the county jail 
You  can't dream 
Unless you sleep 
On a bed of nails 
O God what have you done 
To the girl that kept me sane 
Lost in some town 
Sticking needles in her veins 

O lord can I swap my barrel of sorrows 
For a bucketful of woes 
And all Gods children say amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/30/2014 1:34:00 PM
really very beautifully penned welcome fellow pat smiling this is touching piece excellent pen
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Date: 9/30/2014 4:56:00 AM
Exactly, you have written so beautifully the truth... We never realize the worth of things till we have them..// Malik
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Paul Martin
Date: 9/30/2014 8:36:00 AM
Thanks for kind comment much appreciated
Date: 9/29/2014 11:41:00 PM
Paul, so much meaning to your words, you don't realize life until you experience it. :) eve
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Paul Martin
Date: 9/30/2014 8:39:00 AM
Life is hard,you don't realise what you have until it slips thru fingers Thanks for reading and your kind commet

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