Salute To Spring Haiku

soft, silken sunrise subtle, stitched, shimmering strands swallows singing songs 5-14-2022

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Elena Eagle

Date: 5/16/2022 6:40:00 AM

This was wonderful. Just really liked the imagery.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/15/2022 2:17:00 AM

Beautiful spring song, Pangie, love this... If you would have had Silver instead of gold you would have all 'S' alliteration. Just a suggestion. Harry

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/15/2022 4:56:00 PM

Thanks Harry! I soupmailed you and am commenting here with the same message, I followed your suggestion and made the suggestion you proposed. Tuned theHaiku into an....,,, “Alliterative Haiku.”. Salutes to you for a grand Suggestion. In appreciation....Pangie)))

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/15/2022 11:20:00 AM

Harry, I changed the one word per your suggestion. This is now an official-alliterative Haiku. I prefer this type as a writer. Rhyming Haikus I truly love! Appreciate your suggestion and visit, you wise man! Pangie

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/14/2022 12:56:00 PM

A lovely salute to Spring Pangie… Belle

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/14/2022 1:23:00 PM

Hello Miss Belle! You are surgery Spring itself with Your comment. Many thanks, Pangie xo