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Salty Spray

Salty spray upon the glass
                                           
                                              from the stormy sea

The wind blows  

                  this way and that

                                          leaving its view obscuring 


salty residue



Written around 5:30 on Friday before packing to come home..

holidaylifenaturefree verse

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Joy Wellington

September 17, 2012 at 5:13 PM

A lovely one Sara and multiple ways to read it. Hope that trip was memorable for you. One love and thanks for always visiting and commenting. Joy Wells

John Loving Iii

September 16, 2012 at 9:37 PM

Nice to see the last view so early in the morning after the storm. The sea is a surprising creature so powerful after the storm. But before the preditor. Hope the vacation was nice.

Robert Pettit

September 16, 2012 at 1:42 PM

Hope you had a good time. This is a good write.

Russell Sivey

September 16, 2012 at 12:03 PM

I like what you've done with this write! It's extremely creative with it's form and approach to the subject matter! It seems like a longer Haiku in some ways, with the "salty residue" as the juxtaposition! Very creatively enduring my friend, quite special in the delightful feelings you get from the harmonious words you used to describe the beach house(or car)! I really enjoyed this wonderful poem that you have written for us! Great Work!!