Salty Living Drink

Hush and harken to the stillness,
Do not disturb the spirits
Lying in their stale graves, 
Overgrown with vines, 
Reading and re-reading their epitaphs
With begrudged faces
Contorted as if they were trying
With difficulty to understand 
Why all those lies were
Written for them... 
And then sitting on the gravestones
Or lying leisurely on their beloved vines, 
They wave those who pass
Exhorting them to accept their fate, 
The ultimate calling of the grave,
The ultimate pleasure of sleeping on vines... 
Those green, ghostly vines, 
Who converse amongst themselves
In low, conspiratorial tones...
They can hear them, almost everytime, 
Gossiping about this man's ugly skull
And that man's decaying bones.. 
But who knows how much longer
Before the next vine is born
And she grows to be a beautiful vine-maiden
Sought after by men of substance,
Who with all the gold in the world
Pursue her...
And, if you are lucky, 
She might grow on you, 
And be the first to complain about
Your endless snoring, and childish sobbing, 
For all of them dead do, 
Alternating steadily, 
Peaceful sleep peppered with rasping snores, 
And near-silent sobs, 
Like that of a woman
Rudely robbed of her flower.. 
Only in the dead of the night
Do they finally rise
To full wakefulness, 
To potter about the earth
Seeking water from the living. 
And when they are offered none, 
They suck on sweats.
Enjoying its most fulfilling taste
And, eager to remain, 
They grow new vines,
Just underneath the bed, 
And lay down every night for 
A salty living drink... 

Written October 7th 2016 for Broken Wings' Overgrown With Vines contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Creative way to go for the contest..Congrats on your poem being on the winners' list..Sara
Inman Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 1:13 PM
A refreshing unique interpretation of the theme Divine, well written.
La France Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Divine, congratulations on your win in my contest with this well done poem ~
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Divine-wonderfully written...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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October 7, 2016 at 11:55 PM
Divine inyang, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
Inyang  Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Thanks SKAT....
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